Don wrote a very beautiful poem that was passionate...
and just a touch "steamy"! I told him I was going to try and write
a poem like that. He said "Why not... give it a shot."
Passion is better than sitting around being sad...
yes, I am sad today... missing my friend...
but, being sad is ok... sometimes it is what the soul needs... for a little while...
so, here goes with my poem...
Not " steamy" like yours Don ...as, I am a little bit shy!
Just romance!
Hmmmmmm!
oooh you move my very soul!
so sensitive to the touch...
my eyes are closed
but not quite tight
hmmmmmm
i can only utter those words
and i will call your name
at a whisper
to let you know
you're not just another
you are mine
like no one before you
the playing never stops until...
need i say more?
you know how i get
you just know
hmmmmmm!
sweet & romantic....
ReplyDeletesorry i wasn't on my chatbox...
again...
Kai,
ReplyDeleteThanks sweetie!
choices,
ReplyDeleteWas it really steamy?... I did
not mean for it to be.
As you know how I am...
a little on the shy side.
Love it. full of the stuff that gives passion it's name in the first place. Nice use of spaces and movement in the poem.
ReplyDeleteShy and demure are also qualities contributing to passion. I liked the poem a lot.
Nice...very nice....
ReplyDeletesweet...
ReplyDeleteok....
ReplyDeletei'm writing some romantic haikus
thamk
ReplyDelete:-)
ReplyDeletemust say that seems to be coming straight from the heart!
Beautiful poem , says what u feel.
ReplyDeletedon,
ReplyDeleteWell, I am glad you liked the
poem. I guees it just goes to
prove "shy and demure" girls
can write poems with passion.
I kind of like it myself.
Thanks Don... as it was your poem
that inspired me to write this one.
kuan,
ReplyDeleteThank you so very much!
ari4u,
ReplyDeleteThanks for being so nice!
Glad you liked my poem.
That is not usually my style.
But, I guess I pulled it
off ok.
Nice very nice...thank you
ReplyDeleteekta,
ReplyDeleteThanks.
And, I loved your story about
your parents so much,
It was so touching!!
starry nights,
ReplyDeleteI thank you for the kind
words. You are so sweet!
kai,
ReplyDeleteI will be waiting for your
romantic haikus.... I love
romance... pure bliss!!!
Hey samuru,
ReplyDeleteSimple, sweet and touching piece!
anad,
ReplyDeletethanks for visiting me again.
And thanks for the very kind
words.
thank u......i may have a love bug...
ReplyDeleteKai,
ReplyDeleteThat is ok... love bug's
are good!
Keep on with the romance!
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ReplyDeletewhoaaa smokin! ;-)
ReplyDelete**Passion is better than sitting around being sad...
so true...thats just so very true! I wonder why some ppl waste time crying for too long when they can use some passion up and write wonderful verses like u do :)
Keshi.
keshi,
ReplyDeleteYou are so sweet!
Thank you!
You liked what I wrote then.
It seems like all the wonderful
people that have read this poem
like it also.
I am touched!
And, hey... that was quite
a nun's outfit you had on!
love....
ReplyDeletenight
feels good writing from heart
ReplyDeleteThank you for visiting my page .. hope u will again
mindinside,
ReplyDeleteAnd thanks for visiting me.
I most defintely will come
back to visit you.
I love how this is written. hmmmmmmm!
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping at my blog, now I know about you and will come back! :)
Andrew
Andrew,
ReplyDeleteThank you!
And, I will be by often to
visit you.
I'm here trying to write
another poem...but... it
is not turning out right.
So I will try it tomorrow.
nice :)
ReplyDeletesunflower,
ReplyDeleteThanks so much!
lol @nun!
ReplyDeleteKeshi.
Keshi.
ReplyDeleteyes, lol@nun!
I would not have made a good nun.
I would have had my eyes on the
good-looking priests.
And, that would have been a very
bad thing for an nun!lol!
I like you... you are funny!