Last night I died!
My soul in poignancy detached from earthy ties.
Last night eternity seemed something tangible, something I had known
all along but could not define.
Eternity - winging through hazy recollections of beautiful dream clouds of fantasy, drifting on and on serenely,
endless in space - hearing soft fluttering whispers
of the night, whisperings of love, of happiness and peace.
Beautiful longings - crystalizing into life's sublime ultimatum
soaring on, ever on, drinking, sipping, toxifying
nectar held out to me, beckoning, tantalizingly real.
Last Night I Died!
HI MARGIE -
ReplyDeleteStunning and powerful. I am shivering. Thank you for the crescendo! Your words inspire and explode.
LOve to you
Gail
peace.....
Wow! The spirit can go to so many beautiful places. I love it!
ReplyDeleteThis is one of your best!
It would be so wonderful if each one of us could experience this.
ReplyDeleteLast night I think you had a beautiful dream, your spirit reached high and touched your true home.......love this poem my friend:-) Hugs
ReplyDeletewish some of the things in my dreams come true when i die in them....thats a beautiful thought u have expressed and wonderful lines :)..
ReplyDeleteurs..hemu..
Well, I'm glad you came back to life this morning!
ReplyDeleteIncredibly and powerful. Thanks for being out there and sharing. Love to you
ReplyDeleteMargie...
ReplyDeletewhat a powerfully beautiful poem... what a lovely experience to sip of the eternal cup and to have known its whisperings... and what blissful joy to have you back so you could share it with us too :)
brought here through Paula, look forward to reading
ReplyDeleteWow If you've been by that bank of that river, no- the river itself, by that shore of the sea, no- in the very sea... and come back ...what an experience!
ReplyDeleteYou describe feelings in such a beautiful way my dearest.
Thank you and please >keep writing!
It is adorable }}}xxx{{{{
I've had a night or two like that myself but could never describe it as well as you have. Beautiful Margie!
ReplyDeletebeautiful
ReplyDeleteLovely...
ReplyDeleteHope you're well dear friend:)
Take care
Hello Gail, you are so welcome and many thanks for your most kind words.
ReplyDeleteLove to you.
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Hi Anne
From our recent talks I had a feeling you might really enoy this poem and you tell me that you love it ... wonderful!
Thanks very very for the very nice comment.
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Hello TechoBabe
Yes, it will be wonderful and I believe that everyone will.
Take care.
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Hi Bernie
So glad to know you loved this poem.
Thanks very much.
Hugs.
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Hello Hemanth
Many thanks for the kind words ... they are appreciated.
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Hi Alicia
Hugs to you, my friend.
Will call soon.
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Hello Steve
Very much alive, you did not really think that I had died, did you???
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Hi Paula
Your kind words mean a lot to me.
Thanks very much.
And I am very glad you are out there and sharing too.
Love to you.
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Hello Joanne
I always so enjoy having you visit.
Many thanks on the lovely comment.
Hope you are having a wonderful weekend.
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A warm welcome to you, Kay.
I shall be by to visit you soon.
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Hello Dulce
ReplyDeleteHow sweet you are.
Your comments always make me happy.
And I enjoy sharing so you are so welcome.
Thanks so much.
xxx
Margie:)
Hi Janice
ReplyDeleteThe beautiful way you write I'm betting you would have been able to do describe just as well as what I wrote ... I know that you would have.
I so love all your lovely writings.
Thanks very much for your kind words, my friend.
Margie:)
Thanks so much, kai
ReplyDeleteHugs
Margie:)
Hello Sam
ReplyDeleteOh, how nice having you visit again.
I am doing ok and hope all is wonderful with you, dear.
Many thanks for your nice comment.
Margie:)
Dear Ms. Margie:
ReplyDeleteMemorial is a beautiful poem with a deeply meaning. Congratulations!
Sincerely, Jaime
Absolutely stunning piece of writing! I think this is ur BEST so far, out of all the many wonderful posts u hv written. This is Keshi's FAV :)
ReplyDeleteWOW!
Keshi.
To know death is to know life! Beautiful and wise words you have shared, thank-you.
ReplyDeleteAh Yes, to die to limitation, illusion, confinement, restraint - to know the feeling of freedom - all knowing present, all space and time dissolved, all merged with an eternal breath of spirit. Beautifully conveyed dear Margie,
ReplyDeleteDitto Gail!
ReplyDeleteWelcome to my blog, Jamie and many thanks for the kind words on my poem Memorial.
ReplyDeleteMargie:)
Hello dear Keshi
ReplyDeleteI had a feeling that it might just be your fav and I'm so very happy to know that as guess what, it's actually mine too.
It's a poem that makes me feel such peace.
I so appreciate your wonderful comment on my poem ... thanks so much, my kind friend!
Margie
xxx
Hello Mark
ReplyDeleteI so agree with your words, "to know death is to know life"
Thank you very much for the kind words on my poem.
And I love to share so you are most welcome.
Margie:)
Hi Rose Marie
ReplyDeleteIt's truly the ultimate!
I appreciate your insightful and kind comment.
Many thanks to you.
Margie:)
Dear Aurora
ReplyDeleteThanks very much.
Margie:)
sounds like you might have died in a very good way that night...smiles. very beautiful words...
ReplyDeletehow are you with your hubby away?