
Now I shall walk in the rain . . . the friendly rain.
Down a long road until I find a lane
That leads through pastures to the ocean's shore.
Drinking the strength of earth through every pore.
Feeling the glad response of growing things
Hearing the muted hymn that Nature sings
When rain, the friendly rain brings to the earth
Song and a hope renewed and gentle mirth.
The grass takes on a lacquer of new green
While myriads of toad-stools dot the scene
Like exclamation points. Small brooklets spill
In waterfalls and rapids down each hill.
The world is glad again ... and so am I.
The rain beats on my face. I feel the dry
Parched skin relax to loose a gleeful smile
As I trudge on through slushy mile on mile.
I splash in mud and water to my knees
In reclkess pleasure. Wait! Is that a sneeze?
Good gosh! Great Scott! Oh, I say hab you
Ad aspirid? Sniff. Sniff. Ka-choo. Ka-CHOOOOOO!
The thirst is a step towards life.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful Margie!
ReplyDelete:)...just awesome....well i to wish the rain dance now :)...and get the cold and sleep tight ;).....now i also want the rain in my city :)...and want to write some lines on it :)....
ReplyDeletei just loved the total description u have given :)..
urs..hemu..
Lovely.. ii truly love ur thoughts n ideas n the way you express them Margie.. great work!
ReplyDeleteLove,
Samrina
Great ending! It was fun walking in the rain with you, Margie!!! Now please pass a tissue.
ReplyDeletehee hee, you have great unexpected endings as well!- i loved this so beautiful description of a lively rainy day and time...
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Hi MArgie-
ReplyDeletethe "rain" theme is catching on. :-) I love your poem about walking in the rain - it is God-sent!
Love to you
Gail
peace.....
Very nice Margie!
ReplyDeleteI love the pic too.
It's raining here today. It was also raining yesterday.
I feel rain cleanses the earth and our souls when we need it.
Have a great day!
Lydia
Margie, this is wonderful and beautiful. Thank you for sharing. Blessings....
ReplyDeleteMargie, love this walk in the rain and really loved the ending, now that was different...Luv ya....Hugs
ReplyDeletehehe delightful! big smiles brought to my face on this, a lovely beat flowing as a song :)
ReplyDeleteHa! What a fun ending! :)
ReplyDeleteI love to walk in the rain too, Margie :).
Dear Margie,
ReplyDeleteThis so so cute and adorable. Didn't expect that ending-I laughed!
Did you have a tissue?
Have a great weekend. Think warm thoughts. I send you warmth, my friend.
haha. seriously put these into a book!
ReplyDeleteDONT walk in the rain
ReplyDeleteDANCE in the rain
barefoot, NUDE
The title got me right away...then I was walking through it...until finally, ha! what a fun ending! :)
ReplyDeleteenjoyed, Margie :)
wishes,
devika
DEVI eeeeeeeeeeeeeee
ReplyDeletelets dance in the rain too
with Margie
Jimmy--
ReplyDeleteYou are directed to report at your office at the earliest!
Margie, with your permission :)
wishes,
devika
hihihihihihi
ReplyDeleteI dont earn much Devi
but I am self employed
the OFFICE is in my HOME
hihihi
ha! thats much like me, Jimmy....I earn quite a handsome sum....Start working, stop playing around with girls....and You will earn...
ReplyDeletewell if its other way you choose...well then...its up to you,
NOW, its time I start MY work :)
wishes,
devika
Margieeeeeeeeeeeeee
ReplyDeletethis Devi is hogging your space
tell her to enable comments in her blog
she deserves a hair brush handle on her tender ....
shall I do it on my knee?
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It is amazing how the rain speaks to us when we are ready to listen...each raindrop tells a story. Nature is magical in the way it can reveal the inner secrets. Lovely writing.
ReplyDeleteThat's wonderful...! It made me chuckle. I live in Vancouver, and I love rainy days. And thank goodness too, because we get a lot of them.
ReplyDelete"Ka-choo..." :-)
I share in your mirth and joy. The sound, feel and delight of rain is indeed captured. Well done!
ReplyDeleteAw! Rain! I don't know if I'm gonna love it or not. After all the things that we've experienced. Actually, right now, another storm entered our territory. :(
ReplyDeleteBut your poem is really nice. :D
Thanks Margie! :D
Quite magical! Thanks for the nourishing walk. Hope you found your way to a cozy fire ;-)
ReplyDeleteoh no! I've just seen a spammer here!
ReplyDeleteThanks you so much for your visit and comment, Margie. I'm loving your poems. They are you are just awesome!
ReplyDeleteI like the rain because it brings freshness and animates nature. But an excess of rain is not well seen.
ReplyDeleteI hope you do not have a runny nose?
It is very beautiful painting with words. Love your poem, Margie.
Wish you good health and a lot of blessings!
u have a runny nose Krys?
ReplyDeletethen make it stop running
no more kissing till then
Bless you !!!AAATCHUUU...Hey it was fun reading it .It is going to rain here any minute waana join Margie ?
ReplyDeletehappy halloween
ReplyDeletehappy halloween
ReplyDeleteLove the ending, cute, very cute. I've so missed reading your words Marge. Loved this one, could almost feel the rain and actually reached for a tissue at the end!!!!
ReplyDeleteOh I am afraid of the last bit when it does not stop raining - as it hasn't around here.
ReplyDeleteOtherwise, it is highly romantic, as you expressed it!
xxxx
Fun!
ReplyDeletedamn!..why is every talking abt aachoo!
ReplyDeleteIts infectious...Aaacchooo!!
Love this, Margie!!! :)
ReplyDeletelovely post margie...over here is also raining and I also need a tissue :)
ReplyDeletehug, p
I love the rain, we were parched in Cyprus but after a week of it,I want the sun back!
ReplyDeleteI loved this work, thanks for sharing and the ending made me smile.
oh i LOVE this poem, Margie... i so so miss the rain... and your words took me on a walk through a rainy day... yay :)
ReplyDeleteHi Margie,
ReplyDeleteNo updates... just came to check ya out deary.. hope everything is gud with you :)
Prayers,
Samrina
Hiyaaaaaaaaaaaa Margie..it is the raining season right here in Singapore and I shall think of you when I see the rain :D
ReplyDeleteYou havent posted in a while. hmmmm
ReplyDeleteYou're such a treasure...thanks for the smile and then the laugh.
ReplyDeleteMargie...Where I live, it's always raining...I am actually typing while I am hearing the sound of the rain outside...You know when you are in love, you feel this rain wants to hug you and dance with...So, I do not mind walking or dancing in the rain...very beautiful..great work and my apology for not keeping in touch...
ReplyDeletehehe i like this!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteMargie,
ReplyDeleteI miss you! I really do! Come back soon! I am waiting for you, my friend!
See you soon!
Stopped by to say another Hello and to say you have been missed. Do hope all is well. Have an extra umbrella if there is need...
ReplyDeleteBlessings and Peace,
Rose Marie
Passing by, leaving a hug. Hope you are doing ok. Love xxx
ReplyDeleteCome back... will you? Can YOU?
ReplyDeleteTake it easy. I am with you... cause you are special to me!
Sweet hug!
Thanks to all of you wonderful people for the great comments!
ReplyDeleteI loved them all!!!!
Joy and blessings to all of you.
Margie:)
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Absolutely beautiful;)))
ReplyDeleteOh, sweetie this reminds of the days I like rain!
ReplyDeleteIt it has not been case lately as it has fallen almost not stop, while storming strong...
smiles. love walking in the rain...and playing in the puddles...delicious descriptions...ah the sniffles will go away...it was worth it...smiles.
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