I top the hill and meet the glory
of the sinking sun _
that marks the ending of the day
and shows his race is run _
The sunset flings a crimson curtain
above the smoky darkness of the hills _
and that flaming beacon on the far horizon
my restless spirit stills _
Then an aeronautic wind floats from the northward
as he sinks in an obscure sea _
all is gone except the twilight
the purple trimmed hills and me.
When from that magnificent realm
King Sun has fallen _
and has lain down on his pallet of gold
the murmur of rills to the woodland is calling _
fairies their bedtime stories unfold
and the soldiers of dreamland come over the hill _
with bugle and drum sweet dreams to thrill
hanging the heavy curtains of night _
upon an evening twilight.
Then tucked into bed my day-dreams sleep
as the wind blows loudly down the steep _
there's nothing but darkness on earth's great lea
for all is gone except night voices _
my enraptured soul and me!
Very, very, very beautiful...dearest Margie!!!
ReplyDeleteI have read it three times already and I will return later today and read these delightful words again~
Thank you so much for visiting my art blog...I so appreciate your thoughtful comments. You are a precious and dear freind~
Hugs & Love
xoxoxo
Dear Jan , to have you read my poem three times is truly a great compliment .. how wonderful that you did so!
DeleteI am so honored and I thank you so much for doing so and the kind words ...you are wonderful ...
You too are a dear and precious friend, it's a joy to know you!
Hugs & Love xo xo
this transported me to its very place! Gorgeous!!
ReplyDeleteThanks very much, Janet ...
DeleteI appreciate the lovely comment!
So lovely, Margie. Very nice.
ReplyDeleteOh, thank you, Daisy ,, so much!
DeleteI feel as though I have traveled away for a time. This is precious, Margie.
ReplyDeleteHi Linda
DeleteI loved that you called my poem 'precious' as that is what my dear mom used to call me ...awww!
Thanks for making me smile ...xx
Margie,
ReplyDeleteYour poem transports my mind right back to Santa Monica, where I was three weeks ago. Most magnificent sunets over the Pacific Ocean, with a complete array of colours each evening..Great photographs and memories, as with Phoenix, last March!
Best wishes,
Eileen x
Hi Eillen
DeleteNice to see you here ...
Your time in Santa Monica must have been wonderful ...
Glad my poem brought back the memories...
Best wishes to you x
Ah how lovely! Thanks for transporting me to the beautiful world you have put into words. Just lovely dear Margie!
ReplyDeleteLisa,
DeleteYou made me smile with that lovely comment.
Thank you m'dear ... so much!
Between orbits and rotation of tremendous things, and the gentle rhythms within your poem, you have done something remarkable here, Margie.
ReplyDeleteHi Geo
DeleteI so loved that you found this remarkable ...oh, thank you, very much!
I am truly smiling!
So beautiful, Margie! Just like you. Happy April!
ReplyDeleteYou are so kind!
DeleteMany thanks , Martha ...
Happy April to you
Snow is predicted here ... Blah !
But it won't last long ...Yay!
beautiful. happy spring xo
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Petra.
DeleteSo nice to see you
Happy spring to you ...xo
peace.... blissful peace...
ReplyDeleteHi Shadow
DeleteI liked that you found my poem as blissful peace ...
Thank you!
I am now reading your beautiful words aloud. They flow so smoothly. I cannot just read your poems once. You have such a wonderful gift. Thank you for sharing. Hugs.
ReplyDeleteDear Bonnie
DeleteHow lovely to know you are reading my poems aloud .. that is such an honor to me!
Your kind words mean so much and I thank you so much!
Hugs dear lady
Enjoyed...
ReplyDeleteHi Anthony
DeleteSo glad that you enjoyed ...thank you!
All along the visuals danced in my mind as I read it - your poem does what a poem is suppose to do - pull me in with emotion and sometimes feelings of enchantment. Wow this was so good. Every time I read another poem by you and I think "one of your best".
ReplyDeleteHello Sandy,
DeleteYou made me smile with those kind words...
Many thanks ..
I've missed reading your gorgeous poetry, Margie. This is magnificent!
ReplyDeleteKim, so good to have you back!
DeleteYour wonderful comment is so appreciated ... thank you!
so very beautiful and touching... xox
ReplyDeleteOh, thanks so much, Cat ..
Deletexo
Sunsets are the best - I love this line: "hanging the heavy curtains of night _
ReplyDeleteupon an evening twilight"
Hi Barb
DeleteThat is actually my favorite line of my poem ..
So glad you loved it ...thank you
Smiles
Love that line too.
DeleteWOW what a beautiful poem dear Margie, you're so very gifted to write such beautiful words!
ReplyDeleteHello summer
DeleteYour kind words are so appreciated ..
Many thanks
I thought that was lovely!
ReplyDeleteWelcome blogoratti and thanks for the lovely comment.
Deleteoh..Angel you've done it! i'm speechless....
ReplyDeleteOh, I loved that I rendered you speechless , Lorraine .
DeleteThank you ... xo xo
So lovely and evocative.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much ladyfi(Fiona) for the kind words!
DeleteThey mean so much!
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ReplyDeleteWhat shall you do with these beautiful poems, Margie? Thanks for filling our souls with them.
ReplyDeleteOh, thank you Peaches ...such kind words!
DeleteWhat a lovely thing to say!
Hello!
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Done ...thanks again, Chris ..
Deletelove your poetry..happy Easter
ReplyDeleteMany thanks , Lorraine ..
DeleteHope you had a lovely Easter ...
Oh Margie...this is SO beautiful...truly beyond words...
ReplyDeleteHave a Wonderful Easter, my dear friend!
Love & Hugs xoxoxo
Ygraine
DeleteYou are so dear to my heart and your lovely comment truly made me smile!
I hope you had a wonderful Easter ...
Love & Hugs to you dear friend ...
xo xo
Just beautiful poetry, Margie! You have a way of painting with words.
ReplyDeleteThanks very much Faye for those kind words , they are much appreciated ...
DeleteBeautiful lines Margie. Happy Easter
ReplyDeleteHugs
Susan
Oh, thanks Susan , so much!
DeleteLovely to see you here!
Hugs
So beautiful Margie...your words to me are like a song, a gentle song, like a nighttime lullaby. Happy Easter!!!
ReplyDeleteYou are so kind dear Nikki... thank you so much!
DeleteYour comment brought a smile ...
I am truly in awe, always and forever Angel, Happy Easter and all my love xoxoxo
ReplyDeleteLorraine , you are so sweet ...
DeleteI loved your comment ...thank you!
I send you much love xo xo
Beautiful blog. Congratulations.
ReplyDeleteRose
Welcome Rosa and thanks so much for the follow and kind words!
DeleteA very Happy Easter to you, Rose and your loved ones dear Margie. have a great time on the Easter egg hunt, (enjoy the chocolate bunnies lol )
ReplyDeletehugs
Summer , we had a wonderful day, thanks so much dear!
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Thanks for the invite Chris ..
ReplyDeleteYour words are amazing Margie!!! Truly beautiful! Big Hugs ;o)
ReplyDeleteThanks dear Stacy ... you are so kind
DeleteHugs xo