Thursday, March 08, 2007

LIFE WITH A MEANING

Jumbled thoughts, gushing, rushing
pertrubing, distrubing,
this mind of mine for an outlet.

Wording, phrasing, sentencing.
Periods, commas, question marks,
No polish - just words!

Life is like that 'til we give it a pitch
Then comes music - harmony, improvised!
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27 comments:

  1. shnaggyThu Mar 08, 02:20:00 AM 2007

    hullo margie,

    and when nothing comes out or you want nothing to come out,use ellipsis...

    c yah

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  2. trinitystarThu Mar 08, 03:40:00 AM 2007

    Excellent! A+++
    Good one Margie.
    hugs from afar ... have my daughter over on a visit from Dubai. Only a short one so making the most of it.
    see you soon.

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  3. ShiongeThu Mar 08, 04:40:00 AM 2007

    Merely words how true that is why 'Action Speaks Louder Than Words' and my sincerity & trustworthy will show more than my words :D

    Thank you Margie

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  4. Pat PaulkThu Mar 08, 05:21:00 AM 2007

    Improv is the dance of life!! Love it!!

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  5. magiceyeThu Mar 08, 05:59:00 AM 2007

    birth of a poem...

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  6. KaiThu Mar 08, 06:13:00 AM 2007

    :-]

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  7. Janice ThomsonThu Mar 08, 06:32:00 AM 2007

    Good one Margie...like this :)

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  8. John J. KaiserThu Mar 08, 07:15:00 AM 2007

    Good post. Very nice flow.

    J. Kaiser
    http://totaltransformation.wordpress.com

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  9. AnonymousThu Mar 08, 08:01:00 AM 2007

    So simple, yet so meaningful!!

    preetha

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  10. AnonymousThu Mar 08, 08:14:00 AM 2007

    i liked it!the flow of the poem!
    takecare Margie!

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  11. polonaThu Mar 08, 10:31:00 AM 2007

    and another exquisite poem is born!
    love it, margie.
    hugs!

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  12. ArtThu Mar 08, 10:54:00 AM 2007

    I love that! Good work, Margie.

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  13. GelThu Mar 08, 12:32:00 PM 2007

    Well, your jumbled thoughts are eloquently put! I'm such a fan of music, weaving it into writing and art, I ADORE your last two lines here.
    (((Margie))

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  14. krystynaThu Mar 08, 12:58:00 PM 2007

    Hi Margie!
    You mad me a ballet dancer today!
    Thanks!

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  15. UnknownThu Mar 08, 02:22:00 PM 2007

    GREAAAAAAAAAT !

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  16. starryThu Mar 08, 02:25:00 PM 2007

    few lines but wonderful.

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  17. AnonymousThu Mar 08, 04:14:00 PM 2007

    Many congratulations for you by The International Woman Day.

    A little kiss.
    Pepe.

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  18. KaiThu Mar 08, 06:24:00 PM 2007

    awwww...
    u got a
    cute puppy....
    :-]

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  19. kathiThu Mar 08, 07:40:00 PM 2007

    This relates to my mind as late...a lot of jumbled thoughts.

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  20. KeshiThu Mar 08, 10:57:00 PM 2007

    So true!

    awww I'd love to see ur puppy!! HUGGGGGGGGGZ to him from me :)

    Have a good weekend Margie!
    Keshi.

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  21. J. Andrew LockhartThu Mar 08, 10:57:00 PM 2007

    I like it!

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  22. NimaFri Mar 09, 03:44:00 AM 2007

    Or we can brush them off;
    The thick layers of shadow.

    Then we can paint with bright colors;

    Then comes music - harmony, improvised!

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  23. AnonymousFri Mar 09, 01:02:00 PM 2007

    I really like this one, a bit different for you but it's still fantastic.
    tc

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  24. PriyaFri Mar 09, 02:58:00 PM 2007

    Life is like that 'til we give it a pitch
    Then comes music - harmony, improvised!

    Margie- How true we take things the way it comes and goes.

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  25. UnknownFri Mar 09, 05:57:00 PM 2007

    That's how I feel, except my words never come out as polished as yours.

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  26. YaziFri Mar 09, 06:34:00 PM 2007

    i must say i m really impressed with your blog!! (:

    yazi~/

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  27. Brian MillerMon Jul 04, 01:18:00 PM 2011

    smiles. yes it does...and once we find that rhythm and join in the song, what sweet serenity we can find...

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