The tears I shed for lost balloons
and bursting bubbles soon were dried ...
my sobbing pleas for silvery moons
with lesser gifts were satisfied ...
Many a reach has failed its mark
since then and many a moon has waned ...
but love I cried for in the dark
came to bless me and remained.
Hello Margie,
ReplyDeleteThis is a beautiful poem and it really touches the heart. I love the last sentence. Very nice!!!!!
Have a wonderful afternoon!
Lydia
Margie...
ReplyDeletethis is one of my favorite poems you've ever shared ... so much symbolism and so many images that grip me here, making me wander into my memories and just... stop and feel..
This is absolutely *BEAUTIFUL*, Margie! So few words yet they speak so many! I agree with Joanne and love her comment ~ thanks for sharing this one :) Fiona
ReplyDeleteWhat a sweet ending to a lovely poem. Great job, as always!
ReplyDeleteThat was too good and romantic.
ReplyDeleteSo lovely..we must never give up hope!
ReplyDeleteThe blessing speaks from your heart! Hugs to you.
ReplyDeleteTouching... Some pains and hurts stay buried in us for the longest time.
ReplyDeleteI like it~
HI MARGIE - this poem is lovely and touched me so. "thank you" for knowing
ReplyDeleteLove to you
Gail
peace.....
lovely
ReplyDeleteBeautiful Margie...I've shed many a tears for lost balloons in my life...especially the ones which reach the heavens...
ReplyDeleteBeautiful and very touching .
ReplyDeleteHave you changed the look of your blog - very nice :):)
big smiles. i am glad beyond any regretted balloon you found love and that it has been a constant comp[anion.
ReplyDeleteOh Margie, such a beautiful poem about everlasting love...
ReplyDeleteLove your new design here as well, very gentle and sensitive.;)
Have a lovely weekend,
xoxo
your beautiful happiness, bright balloons, I love it Margie
ReplyDeleteLovely. Just Lovely.
ReplyDeleteMargie, that sort of love is rare and special. So beautiful! It's lovely, when you miss your mark, to have a safe and soft spot to land.
ReplyDeleteDid you see the full moon the other night? Here it was exactly that - silvery.
Wow - such a moving magical poem!
ReplyDeleteWhat are balloons, even "silvery moons" or other fancy gifts, compared to Love? Love that comes to bless and stays.
ReplyDeleteCharming little love poem!
Dear Margie,
ReplyDeleteThis is one of the best poems I've ever read about love in a world of circumstances beyond control.
Thank you for your contributions to life.
Goodlife my friend,
Robby
Lovely write...Glad I stopped by.
ReplyDeleteJust beautiful and you know love that's all what counts. It's better than a thousand silvery moons
ReplyDeleteJust beautiful and you know love that's all what counts. It's better than a thousand silvery moons
ReplyDeleteOh But that silver moon keeps remaining as long as you see it with those beautiful eyes.
ReplyDeleteand I read it again, and I"m so touched
ReplyDeleteSo beautiful and romantic. I like your new background.
ReplyDeleteYou are a blessed woman Margie. Such a beautiful tribute to love in your life.
ReplyDeleteHugs and Happy Weekend, G
It is indeed a blessing to find true love.
ReplyDeleteDear Margie let the wonder and beauty of love remain with you throughout.
Thank you for your comment. Everything is ok. With the always changing weather and the children getting sick, time demands too much of attention from me now.
Have a great weekend.
Of course, one of the beautiful things I see here that you've captured, Margie, is a child like innocence that manages to bring to the surface a message for all ages! : )
ReplyDeleteamen! this one reads like a prayer!
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful, Margie.
ReplyDeleteLydia, Joanne, Fiona & Judith.
ReplyDeleteYour kinds words on my poem are so very much appreciated!
Joanne, I'm so flattered that this is one of your favorites.
Always happy to share, Fiona, so you are very welcome!
Many thank to you kind ladies for the comments and visits.
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Thank you, Priya.
Wishing you a great day on this first day of summer.
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Thanks so much, Lyn.
No, we shall never give up hope!
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Paula, you are so sweet!
Thank you and hugs back to you!
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Hi Heaven, so glad to know you liked my poem. Thank you!
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Gail, and your comment touched me.
I thank you.
May your day be surrounded with love and peace!
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Thank you, dear Kai.
Wishing you a wonderful day!
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Lorely, thank you for the kind words.
Always so nice to have you visit.
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Hello Kavita, so appreciate the very nice comment.
Many thanks!
Yes, I've changed my blog.
I wanted a more peaceful look and like this one.
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Big smiles to you, Brian.
I am very glad for your visits.
All of them!
You have gone back to a lot of my old poems and left the nicest comments.
Thanks so much!
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Hi Zuzana, many thanks for the kind words on my poem and new look to my blog.
Always so appreciate your visits.
Hope you had a great weekend. xo
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Happy to know you loved it!
Thanks so much, Lorraine.
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Tom, thank you very much.
So nice to have you visit.
Hello Talon, I am a lucky and very blessed lady!
ReplyDeleteI am thankful!
And thank you for those nice words!
Oh, I did see that silvery moon, it was beautiful.
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Many thanks, ladyfi.
I really enjoy your visits.
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Thanks so much, Duta, for that kind comment.
I appreciate it!
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Robert, your comment made me smile a great big smile.
I loved it!
Thanks greatly, my friend.
Goodlife!
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Helena, welcome and thank you for the visit and nice words.
Hello Marja,
ReplyDeleteIndeed, it is!
Thanks so much for the visit and kind words!
Hope you are doing well, you have been through a lot lately.
Take very good care!
Margie :)
Hi Dulce, oh, I do love those silvery moons.
ReplyDeleteHow are you doing?
So nice to see you here!
Many thanks for the very nice words!
Margie :)
Hi Lorraine, and I'm very touched you came back to visit again and leave that lovely comment.
ReplyDeleteThank you, my friend!
Margie :)
Thanks so much, Anne, for the kind words on my poem and my new blog look.
ReplyDeleteMargie :)
Hello Geraldine, yes, blessed I am!
ReplyDeleteMany thanks for the kind words!
Hugs to you, my friend.
I had a lovely weekend and hope you did as well.
Margie :)
Hi Susan, that I shall do!
ReplyDeleteLet the beauty and wonder of love surround my days.
Blessed be love!
Enjoy your little ones!
Thank you for your visit and nice comment!
Margie :)
Hello Michael, gosh, I am so appreciative of your comment and I loved what you got from my poem.
ReplyDeleteI wanted to covey that!
Thanks so much!
Margie :)
Hello Neers,
ReplyDeleteA prayer, oh, I loved that!
Thanks very much!
Margie :)
Thank you so much, Aurora.
ReplyDeleteI appreciate your kind words!
Take care of yourself!
I keep you in my good thoughts!
Margie :)
Fantastic!
ReplyDeleteTouched my heart!
Oh my...
ReplyDeletelovely lovely lovely...
this one was perfect in expression n rhyme :)
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