Marriage is an instrument
designed to be played upon
by twenty fingers
which when tuned
with delicate precision
by human love
and empathy
is capable of exalting souls
and moving mountains
however
the music is composed by two artists
songs are sung by two mouths
and the martial concert is directed
by two conductors
thus the longed-for achievement
of perfect harmony
demands
a delicate and calculated
double self-sacrifice
that from this oblation of two
there may arise
perfected
oneness ~
Beautiful poetry, Margie. It expresses marriage as it is supposed to be. Mine ended late October after 56 wonderful years with my soulmate. When he died part of me got lopped off.
ReplyDeleteFaye,
DeleteI am truly sorry about the loss of your soulmate of 57 years.
Cherish the memories.
I do appreciate the visit and kind words.
Thank you.
Be well ....
Oh! Faye's comment brings tears.
ReplyDeleteMargie, this is gorgeous. makes sense then, when one does not play its part the music is off-key!
Thanks Janet for the visit and nice comment.
DeleteBeautiful poem, Margie. You have such a wonderful way with words! Have a lovely weekend.
ReplyDeleteMartha,
DeleteThanks dear.
I do appreciate that, so much!
Such beautiful words Margie! Two as one is such a wonder and you've captured the idea with such grace and tenderness.
ReplyDeleteLisa,
DeleteI love what you wrote about 'grace and tenderness'
That truly made me smile :)
Thank you very much.
So lovely and wise, Margie. Wishing you a beautiful weekend.
ReplyDeleteMany thanks, Kim.
DeleteYour comment touched me, thank you!
I try my best to spend all my time with hubby on the weekends and we do have some wonderful times together, he's my best friend :)
That was lovely, Margie. Have a nice weekend!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Daisy
DeleteSmiles
Fascinating poem. Very moving.
ReplyDeleteBlessings and Bear hugs!
Thank you, Rob-bear for the kind words.
DeleteBlessings and hugs to you...
Be well ...
when two come together and find that harmony
ReplyDeleteit def sings...and it is meant to be played...and it takes practice
and even sometimes getting it wrong...but music still
can be made...smiles...
have a lovely weekend margie...
Brain,
DeleteYour comment made me smile ...
Thank you ...
Your poems on love and marriage should be required reading at the marriage counselors' office. :) Once again, you've hit the mark.
ReplyDeleteAnita,
DeleteThat was so funny what you wrote .... LOL
You really made me chuckle ..
Thank you ...
I got married 44 years ago this month and remember I wasn't only myself any more. But you put it far more eloquently.
ReplyDeleteGeo, may you and your lovely Norma always be blessed ... 44 years together is so wonderful!
DeleteThanks for the kind words ...
Hi Margie .. beautifully expressed - I've never experienced 20 fingers tapping along in fine tune with each other .. but can quite understand your stunning words and so sad to read Faye's comment, that I can believe too ...
ReplyDeleteCheers and have a lovely weekend .. Hilary
Hi Hilary,
DeleteThank you so much.
Faye's comment made me very sad but she was so blessed to have her soulmate for all those years.
Cheers
So beautiful.
ReplyDeleteMany thanks, Bonnie.
DeleteI am so blessed.
Love is beautiful and when we are lucky enough to share our love in marriage...your words express it in such a lovely manner, Margie~
ReplyDeleteHugs
xoxoxo
Jan,
DeleteI have been 'one lucky lady' having the most wonderful husband for some 30 plus years.
I do appreciate your lovely comment, thank you,
Hugs
xoxo
Oh Angel I got shivers down my arms down my back this is the jackpot on a Love Story how well you tell it in your poetry no bo dy can write it as lovingly as you can, oh gosh I give a huge hug angel and to handsome too, it is beyond my capacity to say the magical words to accompany this real Love Poetry, sigh.....
ReplyDeleteLorraine,
DeleteNow how do I reply to that comment?
It so touched my heart!
I will just say, thanks so very much.
You are so dear to me.
Love to you, always .
xx
Hi Margie! What a beautiful study on marriage. Two people becoming one is a daily dedication to love and goals. It's not easy. But so worth it. And so good to hear the 'perfect harmony.'
ReplyDeleteBlessings, Ceil
Thanks so much, Ceil.
DeleteI am blessed with a good man so the 'perfect harmony' comes quite easily.
Blessings to you ...
Margie, this is really beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThanks very much, Linda ...
DeleteThese words are amazing! Beautifully written my friend! Hugs ;o)
ReplyDeleteStacy,
DeleteThanks dear.
I so appreciate that.
Hugs
@margie: you portraited the institution called marriage with the perfect combination....grt writng keep going.........
ReplyDeleteAmita,
DeleteMany thanks for those kind words.
Oh how utterly perfect, Margie!
ReplyDeleteIt is an amazing coincidence too...it is our 35th anniversary tomorrow, and reading this has so inspired me to see only the very best in our marriage!
Thank you so much for sharing this...
Hugs xxx
Ygraine,
DeleteI was so happy to know that my poem inspired you to 'see only the very best in your marriage.
Hope you had a wonderful day on your anniversary....
And thanks so much for the lovely comment.
Hugs
xx
Your poem is a perfect analogy, Margie. Let's keep the music playing!
ReplyDeleteThanks very much, Barb
DeleteYes, let;s keep that music playing !
You are the kind of woman Love and Marriage was made for. Perfect! This is a beautiful poem just like u. x
ReplyDeleteKeshi dear,
DeleteI want to sing that song "love and marriage" by Frank Sinarta.
Love your comment dear girl .
xx
How lovely!
ReplyDeletethanks ladyfi, I appreciate that!
DeleteThanks to everyone for all the lovely comments.
ReplyDeleteI shall reply later.
Heading to the park very soon with my granddaughter Rose.
It's the most gorgeous spring day here :)
Wishing all that visited a most wonderful day.
Margie
xo
And on to each of you, orchestrated JOY... much love...
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, dear Rose Marie.
DeleteMuch love to you
It sounds like perfect harmony to me Margie, you have a wonderful mind :)
ReplyDeleteRose, you are too kind.
DeleteYou made me smile.
Thank you ...
Lovely!
ReplyDeleteMany thanks, Sandy
DeleteSmiles