Innocent, or so it seemed
a moonlight walk one night
we parted through the garden path
to wander in the night.
As essence lurked within our hearts
a fragrance of delight
romance and charm and many things
were well within our sight.
A gentle gale of northern wind
made the feeling right
it lifted up the scope of what
transpired late that night.
Exceedingly he recognized
I can be rather shy
what overcame that shyness
was the gleam within his eyes.
A glowing vision in our hearts
is what our love required
this poem is merely but a trace
of what that night inspired!
"it lifted up the scope of what
ReplyDeletetranspired late that night" Ooooh Margie, this is a new side of you...really romantic and sexy
Margie...wonderful! My but the trace that love leaves. Sounds wonderful and so much is left to the imagination. Nice.
ReplyDeleteGetting rather steamy over here!! Just right!!
ReplyDeletehey buddy..
ReplyDeletelovely poem n a lovely feeling presented so simply..
Beautiful and simple !
ReplyDeleteGleam or glint ? :))
I think the glint :)
hehehe! are we in February?
ReplyDeleteCool, Margie! cool indeed.
enjoyed the moonlight walk with you, margie. beautiful!
ReplyDeleteLoved the walk, when is your book being published.loved these two lines " seemswhat overcame that shyness
ReplyDeletewas the gleam within his eyes"
seem true for me
Lovely post, Margie!!
ReplyDelete:)
And, പുതുവത്സരാശംസകള്!!
Thats Happy New Year in Malayalam, the language that we speak here in this small state in South India!! Our New Year starts tomorrow, and thought I would wish u a wonderful year ahead!!
:)
beautiful...
ReplyDelete& thank u so much,,
today i smile
:o)
This great Margie... ahhhh... romance... what a lovely ride...! :)
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ReplyDeleteHi!
Yes, this is a different side of me...but a side of myself that I quite like.
I love the misty romantic,sensual
part of me.
I have written other poems like this one.... I might post them
sometime.
Take care!
choices~
ReplyDeleteI guess you rather liked my poem!
Always happy to put "a smile on your face!
Take care!
don~
ReplyDeleteYou said "wonderful... and so much is left to the imagination!"
Our imaginations can take us to some amazing places!
Where would we be without them?
Life would be quite dull!
Take care!
pat~
ReplyDeleteWas rather steamy over here too!
Take care!
shruti~
ReplyDeleteNice to have you visit my blog!
Glad you liked my poem!
Wow! Brings back memories.
ReplyDeletenelly~
ReplyDeleteThanks!
Nice to have you visit again!
Take care!
jac~
ReplyDeleteThank you!
I think it was a gleam and a glint!
Take care!
christabelle~
ReplyDeleteThank you!
Take care!
polona~
ReplyDeleteThank you!
Glad you enjoyed the moonlight walk!
Take care!
starry~
ReplyDeleteNo book... maybe someday!
I like those lines too!
It was the gleam in the eyes that did it! Amen to gleams!
Take care!
velu~
ReplyDeleteThank you!
And, I so appreciate your wishes!
I wish you a new year full of many
blessings and much joy and peace!
Take care!
kai~
ReplyDeleteThanks sweetie!
I am so happy to hear that you smiled today!
Take care!
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ReplyDeletekathleen~
ReplyDeleteThank you!
Life without romance would be rather dull...
I am such a romantic...
Romance is pure bliss!
Take care!
andrew~
ReplyDeleteGood memories... I am sure!
Take care!
This was beautiful. I'm always so proud of you.
ReplyDeleteYou are so very sweet Kathi!
ReplyDeleteI hope so very much you are doing well... I think of you often!
Take care!
Blessings!
What a wonderful poem! :o) This is really very beautiful! Thank you so much! I'm so glad you like my paintings, that really means A LOT! :o)
ReplyDeleteMargie in some real romantic mood ha ooo lala ;-) Nice one girl!
ReplyDeleteI wish I had some dude to hold hands and take a moonlight walk w.o. being ogled at..lol!
Keshi.
Your paintings are amazing Jon!
ReplyDeleteGlad you like my poem!
yeah, I guess I was in quite a romantic mood Keshi! ooo lala!
ReplyDeleteHuggggz!
you are improving
ReplyDeletekeep writing
Congratulations
ahem... what did you eat for dinner? romatic thoughts stir through, the winds whispering sweet thoughts. Wassup margie ;)
ReplyDeleteVery nice and romantic. Leaves a lot to imagine. Already there. See ya later when i get back...hahaha
the last verses were the best ones .. this poem is merely but a trace of what that night inspired .. beautifully written. .. it's like you are telling the readers that words aren't enough to describe the night in question.
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ReplyDeleteThank you!
ari~
ReplyDeleteYou asked "Wassup?"
I do not really know...
I think there was something in the spaghetti sauce that made me a little bit...
well, you read my poem...
so, you know.
What else can I say?
Maybe it was the moon that put a spell on me!
Enjoy your evening... and come back soon!
Take care!
-Margie:)
nabeel~
ReplyDeleteThanks for your visit!
I always see you at ari's site!
Thank you for the nice comments!
Take care!