I stood aside and watched a while
the little acts that made me smile
your doing this, your saying that
the pleasant things you're busy at
some little quirk and then you'd half
begin to frown but quickly laugh ~
It was as though I looked into
the lively, private world of you
then suddenly you turned to me
to query why so quietly
I sat there with no word to say
as though it was a tiring day ~
I hope you really understood
when I was telling you how good
it was to see and hear and know
that all was well with you, and so
I'm writing now to make accord
assuring you I was not bored
a visit's not all say and do
it can be happy listening too ~
Such a beautiful piece!
ReplyDeleteThis sounded so real. Captivating :)
Oh this is truly lovely. B
ReplyDeleteah a big part of it is listening...that is how we know them...
ReplyDeletejust being together is big...we can always do
but often get to busy doing...
Very well said! I enjoyed your poem.
ReplyDeleteOh, so true, Margie! Sometimes my best visits are ones spent listening and learning. PS You probably already know this, Margie, but if it gets too warm and starts softening the snow, your x skis might stick. At this time of year, we have to go after new snowfall or very early when the snow remains frozen (also a little perilous going downhill). Have fun!
ReplyDeleteYou capture so much of what being a human is, in your poetry. How beautiful this is.
ReplyDeleteSo beautiful. Listening and watching, but mostly listening is one of the most important things we can do. I am a listener.
ReplyDeleteBeyond Beautiful...Listening is a gift, a real one angel xxx
ReplyDeleteSuch a beautiful, heart-warming poem dear Margie...yes, listening is indeed a rare gift! xxx
ReplyDeleteWow!!! I absolutely love this with all my heart, Margie!!! While reading your beautiful poem, I pictured you sitting there with your lovely granddaughter, Rose~
ReplyDeleteBig Hugs
xoxoxo
Boa tarde,
ReplyDeleteSua bela poesia tem o dom de cativar o ser humano.
Abraço
ag
So sweet! I am always so happy to come upon one of your poems. They are full of such love and light.
ReplyDeleteSo true - listening is an essential part of any conversation.
ReplyDeleteVery heartfelt, Margie!
ReplyDeleteMany thanks for all the lovely comments.
ReplyDeleteI shall reply to each one of you very soon.
Going skiing tomorrow.
I wish all of you a wonderful weekend.
I love this Margie! Spoken from the heart! I hope you had fun skiing ;o) Big Hugs ;o)
ReplyDeleteAnyone who reads your poetry knows you are a listener. I imagine that many of the sounds of life transition to the words in your poems.
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