As clouds that glow in the setting sun
as greening grass on a lazy hill
as the sound of a song to a lonely one
or an answering call to a whip-poor-will
so is my love to me _
As fragrance to a wild pink rose
or a mid-day rest on the river bank
where the water flows and the shadows lie
and the fronds of the ferns are tall and rank
so right is my love for me _
For wide and calm as the arching sky
and bright as the stars we trace
and high as the moon as deep as the sea
the feeling of joy, as I place
my hand in yours, my love _
love the allusions you make to the depth of your love....i like too that you use natural elements as well...so spectacular a love...smiles.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Brian for the kind words.
DeleteMy love is a blessing from the very beginning and grows stronger every day ....
You appear to have more passion for life than can be contained in one life. Good thing you share.
ReplyDeleteGeo,
DeleteYes, my passion for life is very alive ... and it is indeed good to share.
I think you too have that passion ....
I loved the comment ...
So lovely!
ReplyDeleteThanks Ladyfi
DeleteSo appreciate the visit and comment.
sigh.....Your Love Forever in every nature word, so much Love...your words always touch me so, angel
ReplyDeleteLorraine
DeleteI am so happy to know my words touch you so much.
Thanks sweet girl.
Lots of love to you
This is really lovely, Margie!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Linda .
DeleteI appreciate your kind words.
Wow this really speaks to how deep your love is...this is absolutely beautiful Margie.
ReplyDeleteHow kind of you, Keith .
DeleteThanks so much.
(my love liked it too, actually he loved it!)
This is beautiful, Margie!
ReplyDeleteThanks very much, Daisy.
DeleteSo nice to have you visit.
beautiful words, and sentiment, my dear...
ReplyDeletetessa~
Many thanks on the kind words, Tessa.
DeleteThey are appreciated.
Boa tarde,
ReplyDeleteSão lindas as suas palavras que formam o belíssimo poema, elas revela o seu grande amor que existe no seu coração.
Dia feliz
AG
http://momentosagomes-ag.blogspot.pt/
Antonio,
DeleteYour kind comment means a lot.
Thanks very much.
Wishing you a happy day, too.
My dear friend, your poetry is so lovely that it should be in a small old fashioned book, with a soft ribbon to mark where one has stopped reading and with a sprig of dried lavender fastened to its front cover...so touching~
ReplyDelete~Hugs~
xoxoxo
I agree with Jan ;o)
DeleteMargie, publish your poetry ;o)
And, I would love it in the kind of book Jan described ;o)
DeleteJan,
DeleteHow sweet you are to share such a lovely comment.
You touched my heart so much.
Thanks dear lady and friend,
I will miss you while you are away.
I am keeping you in my good thoughts and prayers.
Hugs
xoxo
Thanks dear Stacy. xo
DeleteThat is sooo beautiful!!
ReplyDeleteOh I agree with what Jan said!
Many thanks, Sandy.
DeleteYour kind words mean so much.
Margie that is just beautiful! Hugs
ReplyDeleteOh, thank you, Maggie.
DeleteThanks very much.
Hugs back to you ...
I love this, such a wonderful ode to love. I have always felt such romance in holding hands, your poem is imbued with such beauty!
ReplyDeleteHow kind you are Lisa.
DeleteYour comment made me smile a great big smile.
Thanks dear.
Margie, my heart is melting! This is so beautiful!
ReplyDeleteMy friend, I hope you are feeling ok? Sending you a big hug!
Thank you for the precious comment on my blog ;o) I have been working on some new art and hopefully will be showing everyone this week ;o)
I am honoured that the girl loved my art ;o) Makes me smile big time inside! Very kind of her!
My leg is doing better ;o) It's going to take awhile for it to heal. Maybe this was a message for me to relax and enjoy life ;o) You have to always look at things for the better, right ;o)
Big Hugs and lots of love ;o)
Stacy dear girl
DeleteI am happy your leg is doing better.
I have not been feeling so well this week but some better today, i am grateful for that.
The girl that took care of Jake over the weekend really loved your art just like I do!
Thanks so much for the kind words on my poem, you make me smile :)
Sending you Big Hugs and lots of love back
xo
This is so beautiful, Margie! You create magic with words :)
ReplyDeleteSuch a lovely comment, Martha.
DeleteThanks very much.
So beautiful!!
ReplyDeleteMany thanks Christy for the visit and kind words.
DeleteI agree upon the consensus, publish your poetry, I'd be your first buyer!
ReplyDeleteYou are too sweet, Lorraine .
Deletexo
Oh Margie, you have done it again...now I am in floods of tears. Honestly!
ReplyDeleteMust be getting sentimental in my old age...or else am craving such love as you so vividly describe...xxx
Ygraine
DeleteOh my, I did not mean to have you tear up so much.
But I am the same way as when a poem touches my heart greatly I cannot hold back the tears.
Many of yours have done that to me.
Always a joy to see you here and thank you.
xxx
Love never leaves the side of people who are true to their love. You are the best example of that. Reading your poetry always brings smile to my face and calmness to my sights. ^.^
ReplyDeleteHi Sui
DeleteYour kind words touched my heart.
Thanks so very much!