Love is like a slippery eel isn't it. When you're holding it you can hardly believe how brave you are...when it wriggles free and swims away you think..eew!
Samuru: Love is like a jello. Hehehe I know u r laughing. If u love it freeze it if not just leave as it is. Love never stops coz love can happen anytime and never stops looking for it. To love or not to love :"hurts".
My heart went out to you for this poem Margie. I havent read anyone else say it better than you did. Excellent poem.
Love is like a butterfly, As soft and gentle as a sigh, it goes where it pleases and it pleases wherever it goes Hold it and it dies, set it free and you'll feel nice
So true!
ReplyDeleteLove is like a slippery eel isn't it. When you're holding it you can hardly believe how brave you are...when it wriggles free and swims away you think..eew!
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely true Margie.
ReplyDeleteSo very true. Powerful little poem!!
ReplyDeleteIt seems to be working now.
ReplyDeleteWhat an intense poem. Very true. If we hold too tightly, we end up losing them in the long run.
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ReplyDeleteMargie,
ReplyDeleteThis is very powerful and beautiful. Once you allow yourself to become vulnerable, the love you feel is beyond words!
Take care :)
Robyn
Hon, this is beautiful. Seriously, you should start a card company.
ReplyDeleteVery wise indeed :-)
ReplyDeleteanali
ReplyDeleteIt is true!
nice to see you again!
Take care!
HE
ReplyDeleteWhere do you come up with those words of yours?
You do make me laugh... and laughter so good...
Take care!
starry
ReplyDeleteyes, very true!
Take care!
pat
ReplyDeleteanother true!
Thanks Pat!
pecos
ReplyDeleteyes it's working now!
Thanks for stopping by!
Deb
ReplyDeleteI thought you might agree with me!
Take care!
kai
ReplyDeleteThank you sweetie!
robyn
ReplyDeletethanks for the kind words!
Take care!
kathi
ReplyDeletethank you so much!
you are too nice... a card company?
That is such a compliment!
You are sweet to say that!
Thank you eileen!
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How can the enternal flame come to harm...
ReplyDeleteSamuru:
ReplyDeleteLove is like a jello. Hehehe I know u r laughing. If u love it freeze it if not just leave as it is.
Love never stops coz love can happen anytime and never stops looking for it.
To love or not to love :"hurts".
hey this is BEAUTIFUL Margie! SO well-thought of. Cos u cant own love!
ReplyDeleteHugggggggggz!
Keshi.
so, you are back in your sweet moods!! :) cool!! this is good!
ReplyDeleteLovely!
ReplyDeleteI cudnt have agreed with u more, Margie!! Its so true!! :)
ReplyDeleteHey, and I forgot to tell u.
ReplyDeleteThe new profile pic looks so nice!!
:)
nice poems!
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed this piece and also 'Epitaph'.
Thanks.
Thats like my Margie, so beautiful and so true.
ReplyDeleteNo one can ever truly own love.
kuan
ReplyDeleteNothing can hurt it!
priya
ReplyDeleteyes, I was laughing when I read what you wrote!
Thanks!
I liked that!
Thank you Keshi
ReplyDelete**smiles**
and Huggggz!
neers
ReplyDeleteThanks!
**smiles**
Thank you Andrew!
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velu
ReplyDeleteSo true... yes!
And glad you like my new profile pic. Thanks!
here and now
ReplyDeleteThank you for visiting me!
I am glad to know you like my poems!
christabelle
ReplyDeletethank you!
You are sweet!
Shines like the pot of gold! :D
ReplyDeleteLoved it.
give your heart to me too
ReplyDeleteMy heart went out to you for this poem Margie. I havent read anyone else say it better than you did. Excellent poem.
ReplyDeleteLove is like a butterfly,
As soft and gentle as a sigh,
it goes where it pleases
and it pleases wherever it goes
Hold it and it dies,
set it free and you'll feel nice
merryweather
ReplyDeletethank you so much for your kind words!
saby
ReplyDeletemy heart belongs to many
you may have a part of it too!
Thanks for your kind words Ari!
ReplyDeleteAnd,I loved your poem!
Simply beautiful.
ReplyDeleteJust simple beautiful truth.
Bless you, peace to you, and thank you for writing about love.
serenity
ReplyDeleteWelcome to my blog!
Thank you for all those kind
and wonderful words!