I can't write as Kilmer, you see
Yet, I adore you, lovely tree _
Your graceful curtsies in the breeze
As you converse with other trees _
The season's altering of your dress
Your firm and sober steadiness _
While anchored on your lonely hill
I admire you there so still _
You seem contented there and too
Romance just seems to come to you _
I wander 'round just here and there
You never travel anywhere _
You never leave your habitat
Yet, you have seen things I have not _
I so often wish I knew
How life there is liked by you _
If it is like it seems to be
Even though I may be free _
I'm so often not content
Ah, restless me _
I sometimes wish I were a tree!
("Trees" by Joyce Kilmer is the inspiration
for this poem.)
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I think you gave Kilmer a run for her money. Love your poem and great photograph!
ReplyDeleteThanks Chris ...I appreciate the visit ...
DeleteI could never be as good as Kilmer though , he was an amazing poet!
I agree with Chris, Margie, I do believe you gave Kilmer a run for her money with this lovely poem! I also love this stormy photo!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much dear Linda for the kind words ...
DeleteAlways a joy to have you visit ..xx
Beautiful, dear Margie and Kilmer has competition...no doubt!!!
ReplyDeleteI love the neat tree in your beautiful photo, too!!!
Hugs & Love
xoxoxo
You are such a kind person ... thanks so much, dear Jan
DeleteThe tree I also love .. a memory of a beautiful day when we attended a wedding ...
Hugs & Love back xoxoxo
Enjoyed
ReplyDeleteSo glad, thank, you, Anthony
DeleteSmiles
HI MARGIE beautiful and powerful image blended gloriously with your poetic words of natures glory
ReplyDeleteLove Gail
peace.....
Gail, such a lovely comment that made me smile .. truly!
DeleteMany thanks ...
Love and peace to you
I love this poem, Margie. And the photo is wonderful too.
ReplyDeleteHi Daisy
DeleteSo nice that you loved my poem and I loved your comment,
Thank you!
Just fabulous... I nearly wrote 'tree-mendous'!
ReplyDeleteLadyfi
DeleteWell, you did write 'tree-mendous!'
Thank you so much!
Wonderful piece, well done!
ReplyDeleteThanks for the kind words, blogoratti
DeleteNice to see you here.
Beautiful poem. And that photo is amazing! I just love it.
ReplyDeleteHi Martha
DeleteThanks so much for the lovely comment.
I kind of love the photo too :o)
I approve! And presume to believe Kilmer would approve of this work in homage to a poet and soldier who left us too soon. Your poem reminds me that freedom is a function of character.
ReplyDeleteGeo,
DeleteI can see you are a fan of Kilmer as I am ... he was a fine poet dd leave much too soon.
Your approval means so much ...thank you, kind sir!
I used to wish that my father was a tree because I would find him in the same place
ReplyDeletePeaches ...
DeleteAlways good to have you visit ..
Such an interesting comment about you wishing your father was a tree so you could find him in the same place
Makes me ponder ...
I have always loved the Tree poem by Klimer. Your poem is beautifully written.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Anne for the kind words.
DeleteI too have always loved the poem "Trees'
Wow! What a wonderful poem, I would like to read it again and again :)
ReplyDeleteHow sweet Aunt Mary that you want to read my poem again and again ..
DeleteThat made me smile ... Many thanks on the lovely comment,
fantastic, I wish I had your way with words!
ReplyDeleteThanks Petra .
DeleteBut you do have quite the way with words!
You really do!
Yes, true fact: the tree's steadiness, rooted in one place, but ever changing by seasons. That's admirable and even enviable.
ReplyDeleteI like your lovely poem (reread itmore than once).
Duta,
DeleteI so enjoyed your comment about trees and I so thank you for the kind words on my poem ...it's so nice knowing you read it more than once.
Smiles ...
nice poem; i love trees myself
ReplyDeletehi Margie, i invite you to link up at Monday WRites (any Monday)
http://myblog-verses.blogspot.com/
much love...
Welcome Gillena and thanks for the nice comment,
DeletePure melody to me, we share that love of trees, and in your words you make come alive healthy and free, the way it should be, all my love angel xoxoxo
ReplyDeleteLorraine , as you found pure melody in my poem, I found the same in your lovely comment ...music to my ears!
DeleteThanks dear one ...
all my love back to you xoxoxo
oh and on your I can't write like 'Kilmer' you're right you can't you write poetry so much bette
ReplyDeleteAnd another lovely comment from you, Lorraine
DeleteYou touched my heart, once again ...thank you so much!
I do my best but never as good as Kilmer but thanks for making me smile xo
Hi Margie - that's lovely .. I love the idea of the tree seeing so much, understanding and gleaning wisdom as the season's change and her dress alters .. it's great - and fun to read and think about - cheers Hilary
ReplyDeleteHi Hilary
DeleteI really liked that you found my poem lovely ...I so love trees and so loved your comment ...many thanks
Cheers
Hi Margie! I totally get the pull and push of wanting to travel, and wanting to be still. They both have such wonderful benefits. I liked the part of about the tree having 'romance just come to you'. They sure do make it look easy don't they?
ReplyDeleteWishing you gentle breezes,
Ceil
Hi Ceil
DeleteNice to see you .. I so enjoyed your comment,
I so love those gentle breezes ...
What a beauteous poem! I love trees too, you capture feelings I share as well so well! Such a beautiful ode to such a beautiful tree... What a gorgeous photo too!
ReplyDeleteLisa, your lovely comment means so much and I thank you so much!
DeleteTrees are so amazing and wonderful and I so love them all ...
Oh Margie...you know how much I adore trees...so this beautiful poem has well and truly touched my Soul!
ReplyDeleteOh wow...and triple WOW...
and that stunning photo...oh Margie...you look so right there beside your tree...as if you truly belong together...:)
Love & Hugs xoxoxo
Yes, dear Ygraine, I do know how much you adore trees and I am so touched by your most lovely comment ... I am in awe of your kindness and I thank you , thank you, so much dear lady!
DeleteLove & Hugs back to you xoxoxo
Beautiful photo and you standing way over there by that tree and what a great poem. Such talent you have for expressing what you feel.
ReplyDeleteSandy , you are so kind.
DeleteI so appreciate your lovely comment!
Many thanks ...
Your talent abounds in your art and photography and I love both!
I am in awe of what you've expressed and of the magnificent giant in your photo!
ReplyDeleteOh, thanks so much, Barb.
DeleteSuch a nice thing to say
Smiles
I'm glad I'm a person, but I do wish I could talk with the trees! Enjoyed your poem! :)
ReplyDeleteHi Bethany
DeleteI too am glad you are a person ... LOL
And I actually do 'talk to the trees' and wish they could talk back , in their own way they do as they give me such solace!
Glad you enjoyed my poem
How lovely~ You make me want to go hug one of mine!
ReplyDeleteA warm welcome Ella and you made me smile on the comment ...thank you!
Deletewhat a lovely poem.
ReplyDeleteSometimes we wish to be that we are not, but created us as we are with purpose.
I am missing your blogpost coz they are not updating in my feeds.
Hi Joy
DeleteSo nice to see you again .. and thanks for the kind words,
Sorry you are not getting my posts ...
love this Margie. I love trees. I wonder what they would say if they could talk...the stories they'd tell, of the people who stopped by and the things they've seen... especially those very old ones. I also love the way you write.
ReplyDeleteHi Nikki
DeleteSo nice that you loved my poem ...your kind words are so appreciated ...
I have known and loved many a tree in my lifetime ...
Margie,
ReplyDeleteA very thought provoking poem, which made me consider, all that the oak tree may have 'witnessed,' in its lifetime..The love, the tears, the meetings and the funtimes with children playing etc..This is a charming ode to a strong part of nature..
Happy Weekend,
Eileen x
Hello Eileen
DeleteI so enjoyed all you shared here and I appreciate that you found this a charming ode ...really like that ... many thanks xx
Many thanks to everyone that took the time to drop to read my poem and leave a comment.
ReplyDeleteI so appreciate each comment and thank you all so much.
I shall reply to each of you next week as today I am very busy with my granddaughter.
Wishing everyone a wonderful weekend full of much joy!
I so enjoyed this poem Margie, what a wonderful talent you possess:)
ReplyDeleteYou are so kind Rose ...thank you very much!
DeleteBeautiful Margie and I love that photo!!!!
ReplyDeleteThanks dear Stacy ..
DeleteI hope you are feeling much better!