At the first light the scene changes
the darkness and shadows fade slowly
and with that fading go the fears
of the quiet, ominous night ~
on the terrace the dew is heavy
and the light gleams of the silvery line
soft sounds of people waking
rustle of sheets and eyes opening ~
river sounds, leaves becoming aware
of sunlight and a light breeze ~
angels that flew down last night
and ministered to the lonely
to the sad and fearful
have closed their eyes
and tucked in their wings
they fade slowly
into the brightening light ~
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photo was taken at Garden of the Gods, Colorado Springs. Co.
one of the most beautiful places in the world ~
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photo was taken at Garden of the Gods, Colorado Springs. Co.
one of the most beautiful places in the world ~
You write as beautifully as the angels, Margie...so lovely~~~
ReplyDeleteLovely photo, also...
Have a beautiful day.
Warm Hugs My Friend~~~
Jan, you are so kind.
DeleteThanks so much.
I send warm hugs to you.
So glad you did not delete your blog.
all that visit you love and care about you.
Margie, this is stunning!!! "Angels that flew down last night and ministered to the lonely, to the sad and fearful" Truly breath taking words through this writing!
ReplyDelete(My friend, if I am repeating myself, sorry, but I just wanted to say, that I was really touched that you and your hubby loved the painting!)
Big Hugs ;o)
Stacy, your lovely comment is so appreciated.
DeleteMany thanks dear.
Big Hugs back.
Wonderful poetry from you!
ReplyDeleteThanks very much, sandy
DeleteMargie, you made me want to catch this first light and experience what you wrote at the very beginning in your poem. I told myself so many times that I have once in a life time to see this first light but I am so lazy.
ReplyDeleteThis is a poem of awakening. Awakening of sounds, nature and people. How beautiful you wrote about it, my dear Margie.
This poem touched my heart!!!!
Warm hugs and best wishes from Kaya.
Dear kaya, you are a special lady,
DeleteLoved the comment.
Many thanks.
Oh, the early morning is such a beautiful and glorious time of day, I hope you get to experience it soon.
Warm hugs , Kaya
Beautiful poem, Margie! There is a bright soul inside you.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the wonderful comment, Martha,
DeleteYou are sweet.
I accept this as I do some Compline Hymns, comforting and beautiful.
ReplyDeleteGeo, such lovely words.
DeleteMany thanks.
Oh my! Words can be so powerful and I see they are yours to command. What a lovely poem!
ReplyDeleteVan Goggins, thank you.
Deletesmiles...i love the angels closing their eyes to rest in the light...i am glad they are there though to comfort the lonely...they def are needed...what a lovely dawn you greeted...
ReplyDeleteBrian, angels are greatly needed.
DeleteThank you, my dawn was breathtaking.
Here after aeons! Loved reading u as always Margie. Please keep writing. I miss u and ur writings...shall try not to fade away :)
ReplyDeleteMWAH!
Keshi dear, my heart is overjoyed to see you here.
DeleteMiss you terribly.
Thanks for visiting and the kind words
MWAH
Oh, so beautifully written! Sad and yet lovely.
ReplyDeleteladyfi, many thanks.
DeleteI love this so much angel, 'cause I know it is true, and the beauty and angels that surround those lonely souls are real, and then there's THE PHOTO, WOW! You look wonderful I bet Handsome took it! and I bet it took his breath away xx
ReplyDeleteLorraine, do you know how much your sweet comment made me smile .
DeleteSo very much!
Yes, Handsome took the photo, he;s the one that takes my breath away as I love him so much, more each day of my life .
xx
Beautiful poem!
ReplyDeletethanks so much , ayala
Deleteyes it is sooo beautiful and you have captured that in the first sentence ... how the light changes at this time of year in CO..
ReplyDeletebeautiful words...sad but hopeful xox
I appreciate the kind words, thank you, Cat.
Deletexo
Beautiful place and lovely poem. Your words are filled with such elegance and beauty.
ReplyDeleteLisa, so kind of you.
Deletethanks so much
Hi Margie, You capture the essence of daybreak so well. I, too, love Garden of the Gods. It's a place where I think the angels go to rest.
ReplyDeleteBarb, thank you.
DeleteI think you are right about the angels go to Garden of the Gods to rest.
Hi Margie,
ReplyDeleteWhat a pretty place!
I love this poem. You've described the early morning hours so nicely.
Have a nice afternoon:)!
Lydia, so appreciate the kind words.
DeleteThank you.
Olá,
ReplyDeleteLugar lindo bem iluminado que contribuiu para o lindo poema.
Abraço
ag
ag, muchus gracias
DeleteMargie,
ReplyDeleteYou have set the scene for those who dread the lonely hours of the night and who yearn for daylight. A lonely place for many, though there is consolation for those who able to keep faith with their guardian angel.
Seems like a really peaceful location to visit.
Eileen
Thanks for your lovely comments Margie, at my Blog:)
Eileen, thanks for the visit and comment.
DeleteI appreciate it.
I love the photo and the writing. They go hand in hand in together. Beautiful. Many thanks.
ReplyDeleteGreetings from London.
A Cuban In London.
DeleteThank you for the kind words and visit.
Nice to meet you.
I have heard this theme before of the night terrors we all face and the beauty of the dawn..this is nicely done, congratulations.
ReplyDeleteTabor,
DeleteMany thanks.
Who could imagine a more beautiful daybreak than this?
ReplyDeleteMakes me wish I could freeze time and just step into the picture and become one with your gorgeous words.
Thank you for this Margie xxx
Ygraine, you are so dear.
DeleteThanks so much for the sharing of those kind words.
Made me smile.
xx
Olá,
ReplyDeleteVoltei! seu post.´é sempre lindo de encantar.
Abraço
ag
ag, muchus gracias
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Hi Margie! I love this night into day imagery. And the angels ministering to the lonely and sad. I hope to be that angel, whenever the Lord calls me to that.
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautiful gift you have. Thank you for sharing it with us all!
Ceil
Ceil, thanks kind lady.
DeleteSo appreciate that.
I have witnessed many times the transition from darkness (night - associated with fears and sadness) to light (dawn) and bright sunlight (day).
ReplyDeleteIt is as you describe it in this magic little poem. Thank you for this lovely description.
Duta, it's lovely to have you visit again.
DeleteYour kind words mean a lot to me
Thank yoi.
beautiful poem, blessings, alison xx
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, alison x
DeleteWhat can I say? Both photo and poem are glorious, Margie! Love this!
ReplyDeleteKim, many thanks for that,
DeleteDear visitors and friends
ReplyDeleteThanks so much for taking the time to visit and comment.
All of your comments are so much appreciated.
I shall reply to each of you when I have more time.
May you all have a wonderful weekend.
Love
Margie
Thank you Margie :o)
ReplyDeleteIn love and light
Cyn
Cyn, thank you.
DeleteMargie, this piece of poetry was very moving and captured that 'special' time of transition from dark to light......almost like rebirth.
ReplyDeleteGarden of the Gods sounds like a wonderful place to pause.
Jim, how nice to see you here.
DeleteI so enjoyed my visit to your blog.
Thanks for the kind words, they are appreciated.
you weaved the magic of the first light into beautiful words
ReplyDeletePolona, so kind of you .
Deletethanks so much
ohhh Margie how wonderful to see these red rocks again!! I lived for 5 years in Denver colo in my youth and I still miss the mountains! wonderful photo and very happy to join your blog :)
ReplyDeleteJust landed on your blog, amazing creations. Keep going Margie :)
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