I thought I would write a poem today
but could not think of a thing to say.
I'd write a poem as sure as fate
if I could just concentrate.
So varied the topics that fill my mind
but nothing tangible I find.
Just take the weather for example
what's written about it seems quite ample.
The subject of love clutters so much stuff
In my opinion, there's more than enough.
The changes in seasons are always here
but they're always the same, year after year.
Or, one could write about sunshine or shore
but that's been done so much before.
OH! Well, I may as well go to bed
as try to bother my befuddled head.
For there's one thing I now plainly see
It's just not my day to write poetry!
That is beautiful - I just love coming in here - your posts are lovely! Thank you!
ReplyDeleteNo wasted effort here Margie. I love poems about poetry!!
ReplyDeleteYour poetry comes from the very core of your heart....and this post speaks about how good a person you are....coz you've not written anything as your heart was not feeling to write...
ReplyDeleteEvery one must do the same.:)
Of course as one might say
ReplyDeleteThere's only so much to write
With words so mighty
That swords do shudder
And light cascades on the bay
Goodlife Margie and thank you for your light
Utterly charming! :)
ReplyDeleteit was still lovely!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteHow clever Margie! Wrote a poem on not being able to write one:D:D
ReplyDeleteyou make me smile! :)
ReplyDeletethanks Margie...
what a beautiful poem...
ReplyDeletehugs
p.s i hope u have a lovely day.
But it is a poem, margie !
ReplyDeleteA ribbon to you.
Even if a subject has been spoken about before -- it's the way you express it that makes the difference.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful!
Hi Sweetie,
ReplyDelete...but this is a poem, and a very cute one for that.
Anyway sleep tight dearie.
Missing you so much.
Hey take good care of urself, I'm trying to do that myself.
Love ya heaps!!!
You said you couldn't write poem that day..
ReplyDeleteBut i love what u posted...
Actually it is a poem...
hehe...
have a nice day Margie!
definitely not a wasted effort, margie! on the contrary, you created a wonderful poem!
ReplyDeletetake care :)
So today is blank no worries even in this day you are flowing with poetry...Here I am after reading yours thought will write one poem about you LOL
ReplyDelete~ Fountain Pen ~
Luxuries pen
In slickness designed
Luminous colors
Ink fountain
Will flow with words
Under the touch of your hands
But the page remain
Unwritten
Blank without your words
As today was fated
Going by without poetry
Inspiration did not find its way
Embossing words with fountain pen
That ultimately fills blankness
In the heart of your page
Copyright 2006 nasra al adawi
Loved it. I can sure relate. There is so much to say, but sometimes my fingers get tied up and can not click the keys to make it come out.
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Oh Lord
ReplyDeletei sure hope i am not responsible for dis
if i had only one word to describe bloggers here
ReplyDeleteit wud be
Yearning or waiting
for Keshi
JOY for Margie
CYNIC for Saby
i compiled the best LOVE SONGS here http://imnutsincapsluv.blogspot.com/
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well if that's a wasted effort... doh! you're great Margie
ReplyDeletelotsa luv ann xxxx
How in the heck did you do that???
ReplyDeletetc
No wonder Wordsworth defined poetry as the "spontaneous overflow of powerful emotion".
ReplyDeleteNot everyday that one gets inspired to create a poem; somedays it just 'wasted effort'.
don't feel silly margie, it is a hawk!!
ReplyDeleteWe think it is a red tailed hawk.
When his wingspan is open it is huge plus I have seen it swoop down for prey.:)
tc
well Margie ur talented or what! That was one cool poem .WOW! Nothing to say but so well-said :)
ReplyDeleteHugggggggggz sweetie!
Keshi.
btw Im moon-walking to the tune of FAME...
ReplyDeleteremember my name (faaaaame)
I'm gonna live forever..
I'm gonna learn how to fly (high)
I feel it coming together
people will see me and die...
la la la la laaa la...
la la la la laaa...
LOL!
Keshi.
Awwwww! Beautiful poem my friend! :o)
ReplyDeletei'm on my chatbox
ReplyDeleteI like your "off" days as well as your "on" days.
ReplyDeletesometimes, random thoughts and random writings make good poem. don't you think so?
ReplyDeletewell, i think so.
something from nothing! :)
ReplyDeletehahaha...so much for not writing a poem!
ReplyDeleteloved it!
ditto on that ekta,
ReplyDeleteMargie you do work well each day.
Hugs for you today ... its dark, dank and dismal. What the heck! she lol ... :o)
A poem for those of us who get blocked! Who would have thought it? Thanks for sharing, even if you didn't think it was there.
ReplyDeletehi margie
ReplyDeletehugs
You didn't do badly! You wrote a great poem!
ReplyDeleteMargie..you write very well. you had nothing to say but still wrote a wonderful poem..love it, love it.
ReplyDeleteA wonderful demonstration of proving yourself wrong :-)
ReplyDeletei had a good time didn't u?
ReplyDelete:-]
Margie: It is still a rhyme and I happens we go without words or title wat to write. I read most of your poems, but I comment only the ones I really like and understand.
ReplyDeleteHi Margie!
ReplyDeleteThis poem about not your day to write poetry is GREAT POEM !
Good luck to you!
Margie
ReplyDeletewe missu
miss u like crazy
ReplyDeletecome back
**miss u like crazy
ReplyDeleteAnd Jim is crazy.
Keshi.
Great poetry Margie. Thanks for your comments at my site!
ReplyDeletehi mmotb...thanks so much!
ReplyDeleteI appreciate your kind words!
take care!
Margie!
Hi choices....
ReplyDeleteThanks so much!
take care!
Margie
Hi pat...
ReplyDeleteDidn't know what to write...
so, somehow came up with this!
Thank you for the nice comment!
Margie
Hi sunil
ReplyDeleteThanks for the sharing of those special words!
I do appreciate them!
Take care!
Margie
Hi robert
ReplyDeleteI loved your little verse!
Thank you...
and thank you for your light!
Margie
Hello aurora
ReplyDeleteThank you so much!
Hope you will have a wonderful trip!
Take care!
Margie
Hi preetha
ReplyDeleteI thank you!
Margie
Hello brian
ReplyDeleteI guess it is ok!
All I could come up with!
Thank you!
Margie
Hi asha
ReplyDeleteIt was what came to me!
Thank you!
Margie
Hello kathleen
ReplyDeleteIf I can make you smile..
that makes me smile!
Thank you!
Margie:)
Hi kai
ReplyDeletethank you!
It has been lovely chatting with you!
Margie
Hello jac
ReplyDeleteyou gave me a ribbon...how very nice!
Did I ever tell you jac
I am so glad you are back!
Margie
Hello deb
ReplyDeleteYour comment is most appreciated!
Thank you!
Margie
Hi christabelle
ReplyDeleteyou made me happy with your sweet words!
Thank you!
I miss you very much!
You take good care!
Luv you too!
Margie
Hi anne
ReplyDeletethanks so much!
Margie
Hi polona
ReplyDeleteThank you...as always!
This was the best I could do!
Margie
Hi nasra
ReplyDeleteThanks so much for your wonderful poem!
It meant so much to me!
Margie
Hello zareba
ReplyDeleteThere are those days...
when the words flow...
and days when they do not!
Thank you!
It's so nice to have you visit!
Margie
Hi saby
ReplyDeleteAll is well!
Take care!
Margie
Hi ann
ReplyDeletethank you for your kind words!
Margie
Hi tc
ReplyDeleteI do not know...how in the heck I did that...it just came to me!
Take care!
Margie
Hello id is it
ReplyDeleteThanks for your comment...and your visit.
Take care!
Margie
Hi tc
ReplyDeleteThanks for coming back to tell me!
I was not sure!
Margie
Hi keshi
ReplyDeleteI loved your moon walking..
to that song!
Thank you!
Hugggz!
Margie
Hello jon
ReplyDeleteI am glad you liked it!
Thank you!
How is your story coming along?
Take care!
Margie
You call this a wasted effort? I loved it!!
ReplyDeleteHi barbara
ReplyDeleteThank you for your support!
Take care!
Margie
Hello avali
ReplyDeleteYes, I do think that is so!
Take care!
Margie
Hello andrew
ReplyDeletelove your comment!
Thank you!
Margie
Hi ekta
ReplyDeleteSo glad you liked it!
Thank you!
Margie
Hi trinitystar
ReplyDeleteAs always...thank you!
Hugs to you too!
Margie
Hello tom
ReplyDeleteI was happy to share!
Thank you!
Margie
Hi gautami
ReplyDeleteThanks for the kind words!
I was at a loss for words, but still words did come to me!
Take care!
Margie
Hi starry
ReplyDeleteI appreciate your kind words!
Thank you!
I am very happy to know you loved it!
Take care of yourself!
It is so nice to have you back!
Margie
Hello eileen
ReplyDeleteI guess I did prove myself wrong!
Thank you!
Margie
Hi priya
ReplyDeleteThanks for your visit!
Thanks for the comment!
Take care!
Hello krystyna
ReplyDeleteYour words are much appreciated!
Thank you!
Take care!
Margie
Hi jim
ReplyDelete:):)):
Margie
Hello keshi
ReplyDelete:):):)
Margie
Hi barbara
ReplyDeleteThanks for the kind words!
Always glad to be there..at your site.
Margie
Hello perspeective inc.
ReplyDeleteWelcome to my blog!
Your compliment is much appreciated!
I will visit you soon!
Margie
Only you could write something so entertaining about not being able to think of anything to write!
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