Dawn comes slowly to the valley floor
stars lose themselves behind a silver sky
banners of flame-glow rise from gray and soar
like windspun fantasies that never die.
Shadows grow long where rocky canyon rims
lean high above the waking valley land
the sun gleams pale, then brightens, while glad hymns
pour from feathered throats at day's command.
Mist runs into the arms of daybreak's sun
the breezes walk on tiptoe over grass
while flowers nod and open one by one
dawn slowly brings this miracle to pass!
Hello Margie.
ReplyDeleteI'm extremely sorry for being late. actually my Institute's server is down & i'm using net outside my place.
One thing i noticed in your poetry is that it comes straight from heart and a deep feeling is involved in it.
Love & Hazards were simply Beautiful.
Byee
I love your poem! From deep down inside !
ReplyDeletePeace to you!
read all of your poems(august to october)...going to continue reading again...you write good poems! i can pick up some poem writing skills here..
ReplyDeleteYou paint the most beautiful pictures! That mind of yours holds plenty...I can only imagine.
ReplyDeleteHave a great weekend!!!
Margie..beautiful potrayal of dawn.have a good weekend.
ReplyDeletethis is gorgeous, margie! love it!
ReplyDeletehave a great weekend :)
I loved the images it created in my mind. Keep it up.
ReplyDeletewonderful....
ReplyDeleteThis is so very well done, Margie! I really relate to it.
ReplyDeleteSamuru:
ReplyDeleteLooks like you are enjoying the fall and the colors of life.
can i drop in for tea?
ReplyDeleteVery Beautiful! Wonderful work as always!!! :o)
ReplyDelete**Mist runs into the arms of daybreak's sun
ReplyDeletethe breezes walk on tiptoe over grass
while flowers nod and open one by one
dawn slowly brings this miracle to pass!**
so beautiful the lines
thru your poetry rays of hope and love shines
Your poem is the perfect complement to Starry's poem.....
ReplyDeleteBoth are equally good
Ouwhhhh!
ReplyDeleteEach of your poems unflods is like a bloom ...
You know?
Just bringing a much needed smile to the heart!
Bless you
Love and joy to you
I really enjoyed
ReplyDeleteSweet, sweetened not by artificial sugar (Equal) but by the honey in the Rock
ReplyDeleteI'm rather fond of "while glad hymns pour from feathered throats at day's command".
ReplyDeleteBeautiful!
Beautiful, Margie, as always. Your words are so reflective of such a radiant spirit.
ReplyDeleteHave a wonderful, relaxing weekend.
It's a nice view from where you're sitting, Margie. Thanks again for sharing!
ReplyDeleteThank you very much for stopping by! Hahaha, your comments ALWAYS make me smile, I appreciate it A LOT! :oD
ReplyDelete...and a fine good morning to you too Margie.
ReplyDeleteMorning is my favorite time of the day for all of the reasons that you so beautifully detailed...
it is the beginning..
the start..
the getgo.
Nature teaches us a lot of things if we just observe. You make it even more beautiful with your lovely poetry. Good one Margie! Have a good night
ReplyDeleteYeat another wonderful creation, margie!!
ReplyDeletehow do u manage to come up with so many poems?? awesome!!! :)
have a great sunday!! :)
So Lovely Margie... such a touchingly beautiful account of the Dawning of a Day...
ReplyDeleteyour poems are really soaring!
:) Kathleen
Margie I came in a hurry after I read ur comment in my blog...u ok? HUGGGGGGGGGGGGGZ!
ReplyDeleteDawn makes every ache a little less than yday...beautiful verse as usual.
TC!
Keshi.
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ReplyDeleteYour poems continue to amaze me. I'm sorry I haven't had a chance to catch up on all your entries. How are you? This poem is beautiful as always. You are so talented. I wish I could express my feelings and thoughts into words.
ReplyDeleteI especially enjoy reading your poems about nature and you create such vivid images in my mind!
Take care
♥Robyn
I just want to say thanks to all of you...
ReplyDeletesunil...krystyna...availa...deb
starry nights....polona....gautami
kai...aurora...priya...saby...jon
mindinside...ganesh..."angeldust"
deepak...plus...eileen...serenity
tree...HE...ari...velu...
blueberry_rumraisins...kathleen
andrew...keshi....and robyn...
for commenting on my poem!
You all said such kind words...
and I so appreciate it!
I would respond to each of you
personally...
I am sorry I cannot do that tonight!
Thanks.... you are all wonderful!
Margie
Margie - You continue to amaze me! Great poem!
ReplyDeleteanali
ReplyDeleteThanks for your kind words!
kai
ReplyDeletehugs to you to!
:)
having recently spent nearly a week in between mountains. I love the extended twilight...
ReplyDeleteoz
ReplyDeleteHow nice!
It must have been wonderful!