I love the night
it holds a magic
a gift of beauty
that grips the heart!
Her majesty - the moon -
serenely moves
among the stars
her subjects!
Casting her wan smile
over humanity
lingering fondly
on young lovers!
The fleecy clouds
implishly scatter
as her smile breaks through
in silver glory!
I feel peace, romance, warm and serene in this post. It's beautiful.
ReplyDeleteYou are an eloquent writer Margie.
ReplyDeleteI love Moon even though moon is
nothing without Sun but still I
love the way moonlight pours in
through drapes or blinds at night so softly :)
I love the night it DOES hold a magic especially when you are with your loved one :)
So glad your sis is doing great :)
Lots of hugs.
Stay Beautiful...!!
i love moonlit nights, too.
ReplyDeletebeautiful as always, margie.
Nice personification, Margie!
ReplyDeleteyehh!i love the moon, stars and shooting stars ;) too!!U have beatifully written it :)
ReplyDeleteTAke Care!!
Loved It!!
ReplyDeleteEspecially the last 4 lines! :)
Amazing, U write very good poems. Do u think u can gimme some tips :)
Peace & Love
Rajeev.
Hi Margie,
ReplyDeleteLove this poem! I'm definitely a night person. When I was up in NH last August at Mount Washington, I witnessed the most magnificent, crisp and bright moon I have ever seen!
Take care a have spectacular day!
Robyn
quick question: I just noticed "copyscape" on your page. This is interesting, I always wonder if my photos are copied without my consent. I'll have to look into it!
ReplyDeletethanks,
Robyn
Helo!
ReplyDelete"Casting her wan smily
Over humanity
Lingering fondly
On young lovers" moldando um sorriso sobre a humanidade mostrando aos amantes a suavidade jovem.
Tank you, samuru, tank you.
Very romantic Margie!:)
ReplyDeleteWe call the Moon "Chandra" or"Chand"!!Little info there!:)
Hello Margie... sorry I went awol for a while... just catching up on your uplifting verse... always does the spirit good to come here.
ReplyDeleteReading through the comments, I'm so happy your sister is doing well.
with love to you and yours xx
The moon is so beautiful, especially when you're in love. Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem Margie.
ReplyDeletePink ginger, how nice you felt all that from my poem.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much!
Margie
Sugarlips, thanks for those kind words!
ReplyDeleteI do appreciate them!
Yes, the night does have a magical air to it...and as you said...especially when you are with your loved one!
I love to take walks at night with my hubby....it is a beautiful time for us to be together!
Thanks for the mention of my sis..she is doing better!
And lots of hugs back to you...kind lady!
Margie
Polona, there is a magic to the moonlit nights...isn't there?
ReplyDeleteAs always, thank you Polona!
You are so nice!
Margie
Brian, Oh to be a young lover once more.*Sighs*
ReplyDeleteBut you are young...as young as you feel!
Margie
Aurora, thanks very much!
ReplyDeleteMargie
Shammu, it is all so beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThe moon, the stars, and shooting stars! Magical!
Thanks for the visit, and kind comment!
Margie
Rajeev, I am glad to have you visit!
ReplyDeleteSo glad you liked my poem!
Thanks for your very nice comment!
I shall visit you very soon!
I do not know about the tips...well, the best tip I can give you is to just write from your heart!
That is what I do!
Take care!
Margie
Robyn, I thought you might be a night person...
ReplyDeleteI have been to Mt.Washington many times when we lived in North Conway, NH. I can just imagine the gorgeous moon you saw when you were there!
Thanks for the kind comment about my poem!
Hope your day was wonderful!
Mine was great...thank you, Robyn!
Margie
Robyn, I forget about your mention of copy space! I would recommend you put it on your blog, and you can always check to see if anything is being copied!
ReplyDeleteMargie
David, thanks for visiting me again!
ReplyDeleteI do appreciate your visits!
Take care!
Margie
Asha, I like that...chandra...has a romantic sound to it!
ReplyDeleteI look forward to your post tommorow!
Take care!
Margie
Ann, it is nice to have you back!
ReplyDeleteI hope all is well with you!
Missed you!
As always, you are kind in your words about my poetry...thank you so much!
And I do appreciate your mention of my sister....she is doing better!
Margie
xxxx
Barbara, yes it seems that the moom is more beautiful when one is in love!
ReplyDeleteThnaks for the kind words about my poem....
I do enjoy sharing my poetry....so you are most welcome!
Margie
impishly scattering clouds! What a lovely image!
ReplyDeleteTom
I love the night, too, but only when it's warm! :)
ReplyDeleteTom, thank you so much!
ReplyDeleteMargie
Andrew, you love the night too....
ReplyDeletelike I do....the night does seem to generate more joy when it is warm, rather than cold!
I went to go on a walk tonight, and turned back soon as I got to the end of
my driveway...it was just too cold!!!!
But, I took a peek at the gorgeous moon before coming back inside...it seemed to be smiling at me:)
Margie
Good one Margie. I love the moon and her subjects!!
ReplyDeletesimly gorgeous
ReplyDeletedo come read my moon poem too. i like yours.
ReplyDeleteNight with moon - beautiful and romantic.
ReplyDeleteGreat poem!
I love the moon, especially a full one.
ReplyDeleteYou've captured it's beauty with your words.
tc
Pat, thanks so much!
ReplyDeleteMargie
Kai, thank you sweetie!
ReplyDeleteMargie
Gautami, glad to know you like my moon poem...thank you...I really liked yours very much!
ReplyDeleteMargie
Krystyna, thank you!
ReplyDeleteMargie
TC, I too love the beauty of a full moom...Thanks for the kind words!
ReplyDeleteMargie
Beautiful...
ReplyDeletehow serene it sounded. I knid of lost myself in those words!
Preetha, I am so glad you enjoyed it!
ReplyDeleteThanks for your kind words!
Margie
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