Let me feel this heart break open to sound
to music playing everywhere, in everything
from birdsong to baby's cry to laughter
to the bursting of seed pods, suck of the bee _
the footfall of deer eating my garden
reeds sipping water on the banks of sheltered ponds
waves slipping over the bar drinking sand
the rustle and scrape of you dressing in the morning _
Let me see cloud feathers turn pink, the moon's wink
trees blazing in Autumn, the gray of distant rain
out over a freshly ploughed field, dirt kicked by wind
pain in a young man's eyes when misunderstood _
see the way a smile carries everything higher
tears catching light, the tiniest of flowers radiant
your hand holding mine when life is too heavy or wonderful
and words have shed their meaning _
Let me know the secrets, the doubts, the hidden
inside of burrows, the nightlife of foxes
grace in the wing, a sweet chord
blended to a voice echoing the ache of life, the joy _
reveal the pattern of desires, the weave and woof
of change, growth of a cell, the give and take of love
lest I forget
the very source of my never-ending thirst for life, for love _
What a gorgeous poem, so moving... the second stanza is especially inspiring...
ReplyDeleteMany thanks, Sharmom on the kind words!
DeleteLovely.
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DeleteWelcome back, Margie. Your poem is very beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, dear Linda.
DeleteI appreciate the kind words!
I like the creation here of everyday images showing love with theses few choice words.
ReplyDeleteThanks very much, Anthony,
DeleteAlways good to see you visit!
Ah such beauty in your words! You capture such moments with a graceful elegance. Love just flows from you... Welcome back dear Margie.
ReplyDeleteLisa, your lovely comment made me smile.
DeleteThank you so much!
I read the poem several times, Margie, and my response has to be, "Oh, I want all these sensations and experiences, too." The fullness of life revealed to me - as written by you.
ReplyDeleteHow nice that you read my poem more than once, that is a nice compliment to me ... thank you, Barb.
Deletesigh...i want to hear that music as well..to see and hear such detail...so count me into the i want that too....smiles. welcome back....
ReplyDeleteThanks for the welcome back, Brian and glad you are with me on wanting the music , the music of life, like me
DeleteSmiles ..
Without love , life is nothing and both compliment each other:)
ReplyDeleteOh yes, that is so true, Vandana.
DeleteNice to see you here, thanks for dropping by!
Ah - so very lovely!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much ladyfi on the kind words!
DeleteWelcome back Margie, it's lovely to see you bloging again :) A beautiful moving poem! Life and Love is so beautiful.
ReplyDeleteHi summer
DeleteIt's good to be back!
Your lovely comment is much appreciated, thank you! xx
There will never be a day where I will read your poetry and not feel the magic that you write, prose that goes through my heart and stays, and I go back to read it again because surely it couldn't have been this, this art of life and love and song and tears, and I love it with my whole being ....
ReplyDeletePS Sorry angel I couldn't visit yesterday early enough but wow I'm going to read it again, no one, no one in the world is a better poet than you, your words lift me up so high, high up to the sky
Lorraine,
DeleteYou are truly such a dear and your comment brought tears but tears of a good kind!
I loved all you shared here and thank you with my heart and soul!!!
Love always
xo xo
Oh Margie...I honestly can't add anything to Lorraine's comment...can only echo it.
ReplyDeleteYour beautiful words made me cry...there is a depth in these words that touch me in a place I never knew existed.
I am truly overwhelmed...
xoxoxo
And there you are dear Ygraine making me cry too by the sweet words you left!
DeleteThank you so much, you are wonderful ...
xo xo
As Lorraine and Ygraine so thoughtfully said, dear Margie, no words of mine can add to your lovely thoughts that come from deep within your heart. I can but share in their beauty and be thankful for their wisdom.
ReplyDeleteAll My Love
xoxoxo
How kind you are, dear Jan.
DeleteYou truly made me smile by those sweet words!
I send you much love back
xo xo
This poem sings to me today, Margie on March 9th an anniversary so very dear to my heart!
ReplyDeleteLots of hugs from Sophie,
and lots of appreciation from myself for your words on life!
Ron
So nice to have you visit, Ron.
DeleteSo glad my poem 'sang' to you!
Thank you!
Give Sophie a big hug!
Beautiful poem that reminds me to treasure each moment, Have a wonderful week.
ReplyDeleteThanks very much, Joyful ..
DeleteWishing you a wonderful week as well.
Thanks everyone for dropping by and leaving a comment.
ReplyDeleteI value each and every comment and so appreciate all of you for taking the time to visit me.
I shall reply to all of you tomorrow.
I am not having the best of days, today ...
xx
So many emotions! I always enjoy your poetry! Thanks so much for sharing!
ReplyDeleteI am glad that you enjoy my poetry ...thank you so much, Bethany.
DeleteWow Margie - it seems as if something has opened up real wide in you - a channel sending forth beautiful words (not that all of your poems haven't been beautiful) but I'm sensing even more depth. This is wonderful.
ReplyDeleteOh my, Sandy, such a lovely compliment, that means a great deal to me!
DeleteI am truly touched ....many, many thanks!
and it's true! just stopping by ...had a few minutes alone tonight where i could put a thought together, lol. my grandkids keep me busy but a good busy.
DeleteHow kind of you, Alexandra, thank you the thoughtful comment, it is appreciated! xx
ReplyDeleteGorgeous! Truly gorgeous Margie!
ReplyDeleteWonderful poem, Margie. So lovely.
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