I stood on the top of a hill
at dusk, when all was still . . .
Heaven seemed to be so near . . .
If I should pray, God serely then would hear.
I watched the dusk fade into night
and soon the stars, like candle lights . . .
were gleaming in the sky . . .
as though guiding, each wanderer passing by.
Nice! Heaven is always near and God will always hear...
ReplyDeleteNice! Heaven is always near and God will always hear...
ReplyDeleteMargie, G-d will hear you anywhere
ReplyDeleteThere is no special place for prayer
He hears and I believe He guides your hand
In creating your poetry wonderland
What a nice way of looking at things.~only a good heart can write so.:)
ReplyDeleteStars do that sometime!!
ReplyDeleteThis was again so beautiful margie!
ReplyDeleteI loved it a lot!!!
Hi Margie!
ReplyDeleteI love reading this wonderful poem!
Many blessings to you!
BEAUTIFUL!:)) Great start for a Monday morning!:)
ReplyDeleteHelo!
ReplyDelete"Heaven seemed to be so near..."
"O Céu parecia estar tão perto..."
Very nice!
Tank you.
I'm sorry you've hurt your ankle, but the rest seems to have been good for your poetry! Margie, look what you've written the last few days! Well done. :)
ReplyDeletebeautiful
ReplyDeletehugs
luv u
And those little stars like candle lights are like God's angels guiding you through. That's how I viewed this poem. Absolutely beautiful as always Margie! :)
ReplyDeleteA delight to read Margie :)
ReplyDeletegod can be so close yet so far...
ReplyDeletebeautiful!
Beautiful, Margie! GOD id love...
ReplyDeletethis is magic, margie!
ReplyDeletei love it!
Very beautiful Margie, as always!!!!
ReplyDeleteTake Care!!
Beautiful words Margie.
ReplyDeleteI love starlit sky its looks so
magical :)
Stay Beautiful...!!
u wudnt believe it girl, I was watching the stars last nite...there was one beautiful star...a lone star...almost like a comet...so beautiful! I was amazed at it's beauty...I was staring at it for a long time with my 5yr old niece.
ReplyDeleteHUGGGGGGGGZ beautiful!
Keshi.
Art, that is so very true!
ReplyDeleteThanks for the visit and nice comment!
Take care!
Margie
Ann, thanks for the visit and nice comment...I too believe that God guides me with my poetry
ReplyDeleteHow sweet that of you to say it's a poetry wonderland...thank you!
Margie
Lovely!
ReplyDeleteSunil, thank you!
ReplyDeleteAnd, I so enjoyed the writing from
your good heart, today!
Margie
Pat, yes, they do!
ReplyDeleteThanks for the visit!
Take care!
Margie
Preetha, thank you!
ReplyDeleteI am so glad you loved it!
That makes me happy to know that!
Margie
Krystyna, thanks for the kind words about my poem!
ReplyDeleteMany blessings to you also!
Margie
Asha, I am happy I could have added a little something to your Monday!
ReplyDeleteThank you for the kind words!
Take care!
Margie
David, thank you for your visit, and nice comment!
ReplyDeleteMargie
Aurora, ha! Maybe the rest did help with my poetry.
ReplyDeleteI am all healed now...
Thanks for your visit and kind words, Aurora...I do appreciate them!
Margie
Kai, thank you!
ReplyDeleteHugs and luv you too!
Margie
Deb, and your view of my poem is beautiful...
ReplyDeleteThanks for your kind comment!
Margie
Janice, thank you!
ReplyDeleteI appreciate your kind comment!
Margie
Magiceye, yes, so close and yet so far!
ReplyDeleteThanks for liking my poem!
Margie
Brian, my weekend was good...hope yours was as well!
ReplyDeleteMargie
Gautami, Thanks for your kind comment!
ReplyDeleteMargie
Polona, how sweet of you to say it's magic...thank you!
ReplyDeleteSo happy to know you love it!
Margie
Shammu, always do appreciate your kind words! Thank you!
ReplyDeleteMargie
Sugarlips, starlit skies are so magical!
ReplyDeleteThanks for the visit and nice comment!
Margie
ty margie
ReplyDeletei'm glad u enjoy my voice....
:-]
Keshi, it sounds like it was a perfect and magical night...looking at that one beautiful star..even more magical to share it with your little niece!
ReplyDeleteI simply adore looking at the stars!
Huggggggz!
Margie
Andrew, thank you.
ReplyDeleteTake care!
Margie
Kai, you are welcome!
ReplyDeleteI loved it!
Margie