Friday, October 13, 2006

MY PLACES

I go to cry in a lonely place
Where a moon hangs in the trees
And weeps all night its tear-drop stars
Brushed by a mournful breeze!

I go to laugh in a joyful, busy place
My face warmed by the sun
And happy birdsongs filter through
The treetops, one by one!

61 comments:

  1. You cry and you laugh,
    a good combination,
    in moments.

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  2. Nice contrast combined to make one complete picture.:)

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  3. Two ends of the spectrum! I love it!

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  4. I like these comparisons, accounts of dark and light, laughter and pain as life does flow from one to another, seamlessly many times.

    Thank you
    Love and joy

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  5. beautifully done, margie!
    grief and joy are both parts of our lives and each deserves a special place...

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  6. I love your poetry Margie. And I love how your heart speaks. And I love how you started with the darker part, and showed the Light on the other side. You are such a beautiful, important Spirit so full of Light, Love and meaning.

    Blessings to you this weekend!

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  7. Heyyyyyyyyy

    Laff dont Cry
    keshis current blog wont accept comments

    hehehehehehe

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  8. Very Beautiful!!!! I'd love to go to those plases when I'm feeling that way! Thank you very much for stopping by! :o)

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  9. Hi Margie!
    I've always been amazed that the words you put on paper are so beautiful!
    Blessings to you!

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  10. Feel the sun in the night and feel the cool moon in the day, Its all in the head Margie
    So sweet of you
    lots of love

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  11. What contrasting effects and how true...

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  12. Hi there I came here to let you know about Don and found poetry to warm my heart


    Don of Conscious living Blog have been hosted in www.livinginpoetry.blogspot.com
    Hope you can share ur thoughts about Don

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  13. You have a great mind and a great Heart. I'm always mesmerized by your words.

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  14. Beautifully written. You really have a way with words :).

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  15. Very special one Margie. Thank you for these lovely words.

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  16. Can i interpret your poem in a different way?

    "when you laugh, the whole world laughs with you,
    When you cry, you cry alone"


    A good one Margie. I missed your poetry this week. Was busy and had no time to check blogs. I am trying to catch up slowly. Take care, i missed you.. hugssss .

    and thanks for checking on me when i wasnt around. :)

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  17. Hi Margie,
    I havent seen you make the blogger rounds so I thought I would stop by. Your comments, your poetry, and your smile are always so uplifting!

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  18. as I read ur writings i see
    You are tallented

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  19. It reminds me of the way i cry in a Lonely place! But you even changed the whole scene by adding moon and stars to it.. Margie good work!

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  20. natalia
    So nice to have you visit here!
    And, thank you!

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  21. "angeldust"
    So glad you liked it!
    Thank you!

    Love n joy to you also!

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  22. serenity
    You are so very kind!
    Thank you for all that!
    Blessings to you this weekend also!

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  23. jon
    Thank you!
    You are welcome!
    Love your new artwork!

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  24. krystyna
    Thank you for your kind words!
    Blessings to you also!

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  25. don
    Thanks for the kind words!
    So welcome!

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  26. iamnasra
    Thank you!
    I visited there and left a comment!

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  27. sunil
    Oh...
    what kind words!
    Thank you so much!

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  28. deeps
    Thank you!
    So nice to have you here!

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  29. ari
    I like how you interpreted it!
    So nice to have you back!
    Missed you!

    Huggggs!

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  30. mindinside
    thanks for you kind words!
    :)

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  31. hey Margie why r u crying? Absolutely beautiful verse again but r u sad? didnt u have a good weekend?

    Let me know...Im here ok. TC n huggggggggz!

    Keshi.

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  32. keshi
    I am ok!
    I am just a little sad about my
    friend Mary.....
    just missing her a lot lately.
    I also laugh when I remember her!
    Huggggggz!
    TY Keshi!

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  33. Delight basking in the sun and sorrow in moonlight! Bewitching!

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  34. Sorrow to yourself but joy to share with all -Thats you Margie

    Never to make anyone sad and to try and make everyone happy

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  35. absolutely beautiful.
    I love your writing so much.
    Thank you for sharing your beautiful soul with us.:)
    Tc

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  36. dodi
    You are so very sweet to say such
    kind words!
    Thank you my dear!

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  37. top cat
    Thank you so very much!
    You touch me so much with those words!

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Each day comes
bearing its own gifts ...
Untie the ribbons.

-Ruth Ann Schabacker