Thursday, March 08, 2007

LIFE WITH A MEANING

Jumbled thoughts, gushing, rushing
pertrubing, distrubing,
this mind of mine for an outlet.

Wording, phrasing, sentencing.
Periods, commas, question marks,
No polish - just words!

Life is like that 'til we give it a pitch
Then comes music - harmony, improvised!

28 comments:

  1. hullo margie,

    and when nothing comes out or you want nothing to come out,use ellipsis...

    c yah

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  2. Excellent! A+++
    Good one Margie.
    hugs from afar ... have my daughter over on a visit from Dubai. Only a short one so making the most of it.
    see you soon.

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  3. Merely words how true that is why 'Action Speaks Louder Than Words' and my sincerity & trustworthy will show more than my words :D

    Thank you Margie

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  4. Improv is the dance of life!! Love it!!

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  5. Good post. Very nice flow.

    J. Kaiser
    http://totaltransformation.wordpress.com

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  6. So simple, yet so meaningful!!

    preetha

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  7. i liked it!the flow of the poem!
    takecare Margie!

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  8. and another exquisite poem is born!
    love it, margie.
    hugs!

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  9. I think that is a great idea, put your poems to music.

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  10. I love that! Good work, Margie.

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  11. Well, your jumbled thoughts are eloquently put! I'm such a fan of music, weaving it into writing and art, I ADORE your last two lines here.
    (((Margie))

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  12. Hi Margie!
    You mad me a ballet dancer today!
    Thanks!

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  13. Many congratulations for you by The International Woman Day.

    A little kiss.
    Pepe.

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  14. awwww...
    u got a
    cute puppy....
    :-]

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  15. This relates to my mind as late...a lot of jumbled thoughts.

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  16. So true!

    awww I'd love to see ur puppy!! HUGGGGGGGGGZ to him from me :)

    Have a good weekend Margie!
    Keshi.

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  17. Or we can brush them off;
    The thick layers of shadow.

    Then we can paint with bright colors;

    Then comes music - harmony, improvised!

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  18. I really like this one, a bit different for you but it's still fantastic.
    tc

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  19. Life is like that 'til we give it a pitch
    Then comes music - harmony, improvised!

    Margie- How true we take things the way it comes and goes.

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  20. That's how I feel, except my words never come out as polished as yours.

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  21. i must say i m really impressed with your blog!! (:

    yazi~/

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  22. smiles. yes it does...and once we find that rhythm and join in the song, what sweet serenity we can find...

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Each day comes
bearing its own gifts ...
Untie the ribbons.

-Ruth Ann Schabacker