I would not have you back on earth
your body racked with pain ...
I know that longing for your mirth ...
your friendship, is in vain!
And yet, when I sit wondering
as night is merged with day ...
It seems your spirit comes to bring ...
the words you cannot say!
comfort and sadness combined
ReplyDeletethank you
Superb!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful as always, so filled with feeling, it does reach out.
ReplyDeleteNice one Margie:)
Wonderful!!
ReplyDeleteSo touching...
God bless you Margie :)
Feelings really come out in this.
ReplyDeletehugs for you
I have been slow in making my way over...actually slow in everything these days...but you already knew that!!
ReplyDeleteA pleasure to see you posting again...
blessings to you
donna
I have always enjoyed reading your poem, each time over and over again and somehow at times it does relate to me and I am sure to many of your blog pals too.
ReplyDeleteLuv you Margie :D
In light of my father's death, I find this piece of writing very connected to me. Thanks for your words margie! :-)
ReplyDeletewonderful
ReplyDeleteThis reminds me of my sister. It's wonderful how you understand these things, Margie.
ReplyDeleteyou got me again with this one!
ReplyDeletewonderful again, margie!
so meaningful
ReplyDeleteI felt this post so much...I thought of Dan...my friend who committed suicide. I thought of my dad. I thought of my granma. And many more loved-ones who dun walk this Earth anymore...
ReplyDeleteLuv ya HUGGGGGGGGGZ!
Keshi.
Hello Floots
ReplyDeleteThank you so much!
Margie
Thanks very much, Richard!
ReplyDeleteMargie
Thanks so much, Eric ....as always!
ReplyDeleteMargie
Hi Samrina
ReplyDeleteI do appreciate your kind words!
Thanks very much!
God bless you, too!
Margie
Hi trinitystar
ReplyDeleteThanks very much!
Hugs back to you!
Margie
Hello Donna
ReplyDeleteIt's lovely to see you here!
Thanks very much for coming by, and your comment.
Blessings and I'll keep you in my prayers.
Margie
P.S I have not been on the other site very much lately.
So very glad to know that, Shionge!
ReplyDeleteThanks very much!
luv you too!
Margie
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ReplyDeleteHi Kai
ReplyDeleteThanks very much!
Margie
Hello Aurora
ReplyDeleteOh, it reminded you of your dear sister!
Thanks very much for your kind words!
Margie
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ReplyDeleteHi Polona
ReplyDeleteThanks very much!
I appreciate it!
Margie
I love that poem
ReplyDeleteHow are you margie!
I am great I spent the day with my friend that just got out of the hospital(she had cancer) but doesnt anymore :)
Hello Patricija
ReplyDeleteThanks so much for that!
Margie
Hi Keshi
ReplyDeleteA lot of feelings for you on this little poem...all those loved ones that are gone from your life!
Thanks very much!
Luv ya too...HUGGGGGGZ!
Margie
Hello Kaylee
ReplyDeleteThanks very much!
Oh, so sad about your friend having cancer, but I'm happy to hear the cancer is gone!
She must be young.
Give her my best wishes for good health always!
Take care!
Margie
Hello Dave
ReplyDeleteSo sorry about your father's death.
But I'm glad you felt a connection to my poem.
Thanks very much, and you are most welcome!
Margie
okay I will yeah she is only 14 years old :(......she has gone through alot for her young age that is fior sure..
ReplyDeleteyes...they r physically not here but I feel their 'presence' at times...
ReplyDeleteKeshi.
Wow!
ReplyDeleteThat is all I can manage at present because I am deeply touched
Hugs
GBU
Arti
That is comforting, Keshi!
ReplyDeleteMargie
I am very glad to know that, Arti!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much for the wow!
HUGS returned to you!
Margie
Achingly beautiful, Margie.
ReplyDeleteHi Z
ReplyDeleteThanks so very much!
Margie