Wednesday, September 04, 2013

One Eternity ~

Do you really know me?
The minutes, the days, the months, 
       the years together ---
or ---  do the many facets of my inner 
being elude you to be hidden in 
darkened shadows, unseen 
unknown?
Do you really know me?
Do you hear my heart call --- 
to you? You look up 
our eyes meet. Do you feel 
the warm hand of love
cup our hearts and hold us
for one brief second --- breathtakingly 
suspended in a limitless space?
When you hold me in your arms
do you sense our souls drifting 
one toward the other --- to meet 
and become as one?
you a part of me
me a part of you  ---
inseparable 
one sun --- one moon --- one star ---
Do you really know me?
the true depth of my affection
for you? The love you shall 
never forget 
the glow ---
the warmth --- 
minutes, days, months, years 
together ---
one eternity!

18 comments:

  1. Love eternal, known and glorious - beautifully written.
    Love Gail
    peace.....

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  2. I am not sure that two people can really know one another totally. We change; constant flux and experience has to have an effect.
    On the other hand we can always hope, as you expressed so well.

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  3. Love is forever and sharing this love is pure heaven...these words of yours, Margie are so touching and tender~~~

    Hugs,
    Jan

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  4. you know...i bet he does know...to love that strong, it would be hard for him not to...smiles.

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  5. Beautiful - another wonderful poem by you.

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  6. I swear I have goose bumps running down my arms and back, it's so beautiful Angel

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  7. Do you know, Margie...I honestly didn't know the true meaning of the word "love" until I just read this beautiful poem.
    Never have I found it expressed in such deeply moving and Soul-stirring words.
    Oh...I am moved to tears...xxx

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  8. Beautiful and thoughtful words full of a wonderful tenderness. Thank you.

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  9. What a nice poem Margie!
    This is what real love is.
    Have a nice evening!

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  10. Nice post, great blog, following :)

    Good Luck :)

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  11. Beautiful, Margie. Such love is rare and fine and enriches our lives beyond measure.

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  12. This poem is filled with love! So beautiful Margie ;o) Hugs ;o)

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  13. Oh and hope Handsome appreciated it
    let's see diamonds?
    Chocolate?
    Letting you go shopping with his credit card while he stays home and babysit that angelic grand-child
    TAKE NOTES HANDSOME

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  14. Lovey thoughts, beautifully expressed. Thank you x

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  15. Every poem of yours that I read - there is a progression - it becomes stronger.
    As ever, thank you for your very kind support, Margie.

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  16. This is what I would call a direct approach.
    Your love poem demands straight answers to the very basic questions concerning a love relation:

    Do you really know me? Do you hear my heart call? Do you feel my warmth? Do you sense our souls becoming one?

    I like it.

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  17. Hello all of you wonderful people.
    It's a joy to see all the lovely comments.

    It was another long week with my little angel Rose and I am very tired but it's a good tired as today was a lovely day together.
    We took a walk to the park and then played in the sandbox in my back yard, she loves her sandbox!

    I shall do my very best to reply to each comment later in that week.
    For now, I shall just say, thank you all so very much!

    Wishing everyone here a great weekend.
    Joy to you, always.

    Love
    Margie

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  18. Glad you are enjoying your granddaughter!

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bearing its own gifts ...
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