Tuesday, September 19, 2006

ALONE WITH YOU

Listen to the tale I have to tell
Of how our meetings bound us tight
We were happy, and young as well
And into love we fell that night.

The moon fell, the stars as well
The heavens broke in two
And there was I
In love with you.

The time was right
There was no light
The world left us alone
And there was I
With you... my love... my own.

Our heartbeats were in tune
Our souls, like the moon... were lost and gone
Our beings blended blissfully together
And we were one.

Our lips met
I feel it yet
We stood and trembled there
And all the world
Was ours to share.

You clung to me
And then the rockets sped
And then our world was all unfurled
And we were wed.

44 comments:

  1. Margie babez is thinking of some serious loving ha? ooo lala nice one girl. Truly magical verse. Anyone in mind?

    Keshi.

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  2. Keshi
    Now, I must get some sleep.. if I can...
    Sometimes I having other things on my mind though!
    ooo lala!

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  3. Margie take it easy babez...sometimes u need to throw lil hissy fits with each other to realise the value of ur r'ship. Im sure he'll make it up to ya tomorrow. TC n always be the sweet angel that u r. HUGGGGGGGGGGZ!

    Nighty night!
    Keshi.

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  4. hi mergie,
    beautifully composed...
    after a long time i have read something in poetry with happy ending...

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  5. That was beautiful! Love and romance-MMMM!

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  6. OMG Margie!! I love this, it is so unreal, our 11th wedding anniversary is this 23rd of September..I always buy a blank card for any occasion and put my own personal message on it. Yet, these words are gorgeous and so true!!! May I ask permission to copy these words onto a card for my husband? I will quote your name in brackets at the end too :)

    I visit you off the back of lovely Keshi's blog. I am from Australia, married almost 11years and have four kids under age of 9yrs. I am a registered nurse and love my career, always have, always will.

    It has been an emotional day here in Australia, with the memorial of our beloved Steve Irwin. Our kids are really feeling the grief, yet celebrating his life too.
    Cheers Carolyn.

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  7. Lovely Margie!You reminded me of someone I love

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  8. Keshi
    FyI
    All is well!
    We kissed n made up!
    Thanks sweets!

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  9. tanushree
    welcome!
    Glad you liked the poem!

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  10. cazzie
    So nice to meet you!
    So glad you like my poem... and
    yes... you may use it on your anniversary (only a few days away)

    4 kids... you are a busy mom!
    I have a friend here that is an RN
    n she loves it too!
    You sound so happy though... that is great!

    Poor Steve... it is just so sad!
    Give your kids a *hug* for me!

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  11. blueberry_rumraisins
    Thanks!
    An't love grand!

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  12. AAAAAAAAAAH!
    Hubba hubba
    Schwing!
    giggity giggity giggity
    muah muah
    Kaboom!
    wo!

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  13. Margie, you got love down to a fine art!! Good for you!!

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  14. There's nothing better when the world fades out and there's nothing left but you and the person you're madly in love with.

    Great poem! I have yet to find a poem of yours, that I don't like!

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  15. really history of the life

    great poem

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  16. ah, margie, that's some love story!
    hope it ends with "... and they lived happily ever after" :)

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  17. Margie..that was beautiful. can see you under the stars and the moon. In love, is it your wedding aniversary? you tell us stories with your poems.

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  18. awwwwww....
    u have been reading
    my love poetry too much....lol
    its such a lovely poem...

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  19. that was briliant!
    so touching...
    keep on posting!

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  20. ooo lala GREAT ;-) Huggggggggggggz!

    Told ya so!

    Keshi.

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  21. HE
    Love It!
    You always liven this place up!

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  22. Pat
    Love down to a fine art.
    Wow! Thanks!
    That is nice to hear...

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  23. deb
    Thanks so much!
    How nice of you to say that!

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  24. polona
    Yes, and they the love story ends
    with... and they lived happily ever after!

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  25. starry
    Thank you so much!
    No, it is not my wedding anniversary!
    I was just feeling full of love!

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  26. thanks Kai!
    Love poems are good!
    I love to read yours!

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  27. drama diva
    Welcome!
    Thanks for those kind words!

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  28. Thanks Keshi
    You were right!
    Huggggz!

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  29. Samuru: I too thought it must be your wedding anniv'. You are so full of love and share with us in your poems. This love is true and never sleeps coz I hear in your heart "love is all I have".

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  30. aww... so romantic! beautiful!

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  31. Hi Margie,

    Thanks for dropping by my blog.:)Thats a beautiful expression - ya post;)

    Cheers!

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  32. Awwwwwwwwwww too sweet. What a delight, I feel like kissing my husband straight away..but am at work...hehehe..will text him straight away...you filled my heart with love

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  33. Beautiful tribute...and poetic to boot.

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  34. priya
    Thank you so much for your sweet and thoughtful words!
    They mean so much!

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  35. neers
    thank you
    Romance is in the air!

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  36. dodi
    Thank you!
    Did you kiss your husband as soon as he got home?

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Each day comes
bearing its own gifts ...
Untie the ribbons.

-Ruth Ann Schabacker