Wednesday, August 16, 2006

A MOONLIGHT WALK

Innocent, or so it seemed
a moonlight walk one night
we parted through the garden path
to wander in the night.

As essence lurked within our hearts
a fragrance of delight
romance and charm and many things
were well within our sight.

A gentle gale of northern wind
made the feeling right
it lifted up the scope of what
transpired late that night.

Exceedingly he recognized
I can be rather shy
what overcame that shyness
was the gleam within his eyes.

A glowing vision in our hearts
is what our love required
this poem is merely but a trace
of what that night inspired!

41 comments:

  1. "it lifted up the scope of what
    transpired late that night" Ooooh Margie, this is a new side of you...really romantic and sexy

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  2. Wow! I got chills in my body just thinking of that feeling that transpired, not to mention the big smile on my face! mmmm!

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  3. Margie...wonderful! My but the trace that love leaves. Sounds wonderful and so much is left to the imagination. Nice.

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  4. Getting rather steamy over here!! Just right!!

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  5. hey buddy..
    lovely poem n a lovely feeling presented so simply..

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  6. Beautiful and simple !

    Gleam or glint ? :))
    I think the glint :)

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  7. hehehe! are we in February?

    Cool, Margie! cool indeed.

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  8. enjoyed the moonlight walk with you, margie. beautiful!

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  9. Loved the walk, when is your book being published.loved these two lines " seemswhat overcame that shyness
    was the gleam within his eyes"

    seem true for me

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  10. Lovely post, Margie!!
    :)

    And, പുതുവത്സരാശംസകള്‍!!

    Thats Happy New Year in Malayalam, the language that we speak here in this small state in South India!! Our New Year starts tomorrow, and thought I would wish u a wonderful year ahead!!

    :)

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  11. beautiful...
    & thank u so much,,
    today i smile
    :o)

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  12. This great Margie... ahhhh... romance... what a lovely ride...! :)

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  13. dd~
    Hi!
    Yes, this is a different side of me...but a side of myself that I quite like.
    I love the misty romantic,sensual
    part of me.
    I have written other poems like this one.... I might post them
    sometime.
    Take care!

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  14. choices~
    I guess you rather liked my poem!
    Always happy to put "a smile on your face!
    Take care!

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  15. don~
    You said "wonderful... and so much is left to the imagination!"
    Our imaginations can take us to some amazing places!
    Where would we be without them?
    Life would be quite dull!
    Take care!

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  16. pat~
    Was rather steamy over here too!
    Take care!

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  17. shruti~
    Nice to have you visit my blog!
    Glad you liked my poem!

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  18. nelly~
    Thanks!
    Nice to have you visit again!
    Take care!

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  19. jac~
    Thank you!
    I think it was a gleam and a glint!
    Take care!

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  20. christabelle~
    Thank you!
    Take care!

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  21. polona~
    Thank you!
    Glad you enjoyed the moonlight walk!
    Take care!

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  22. starry~
    No book... maybe someday!
    I like those lines too!
    It was the gleam in the eyes that did it! Amen to gleams!
    Take care!

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  23. velu~
    Thank you!
    And, I so appreciate your wishes!
    I wish you a new year full of many
    blessings and much joy and peace!
    Take care!

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  24. kai~
    Thanks sweetie!
    I am so happy to hear that you smiled today!
    Take care!

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  26. kathleen~
    Thank you!
    Life without romance would be rather dull...
    I am such a romantic...
    Romance is pure bliss!
    Take care!

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  27. andrew~
    Good memories... I am sure!
    Take care!

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  28. This was beautiful. I'm always so proud of you.

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  29. You are so very sweet Kathi!
    I hope so very much you are doing well... I think of you often!
    Take care!
    Blessings!

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  30. What a wonderful poem! :o) This is really very beautiful! Thank you so much! I'm so glad you like my paintings, that really means A LOT! :o)

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  31. Margie in some real romantic mood ha ooo lala ;-) Nice one girl!

    I wish I had some dude to hold hands and take a moonlight walk w.o. being ogled at..lol!


    Keshi.

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  32. Your paintings are amazing Jon!
    Glad you like my poem!

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  33. yeah, I guess I was in quite a romantic mood Keshi! ooo lala!
    Huggggz!

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  34. you are improving
    keep writing
    Congratulations

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  35. ahem... what did you eat for dinner? romatic thoughts stir through, the winds whispering sweet thoughts. Wassup margie ;)

    Very nice and romantic. Leaves a lot to imagine. Already there. See ya later when i get back...hahaha

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  36. the last verses were the best ones .. this poem is merely but a trace of what that night inspired .. beautifully written. .. it's like you are telling the readers that words aren't enough to describe the night in question.

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  37. ari~
    You asked "Wassup?"
    I do not really know...
    I think there was something in the spaghetti sauce that made me a little bit...
    well, you read my poem...
    so, you know.
    What else can I say?
    Maybe it was the moon that put a spell on me!
    Enjoy your evening... and come back soon!
    Take care!
    -Margie:)

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  38. nabeel~
    Thanks for your visit!
    I always see you at ari's site!
    Thank you for the nice comments!
    Take care!

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bearing its own gifts ...
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