Monday, July 10, 2006

CLOUDS

Each kind heart is
like a sun...
That shines upon the
passing crowd...
How sad I feel on
selfish days...
When I have
lived behind
a cloud!

16 comments:

  1. Has a Walt Whitman feel to it. Nice!

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  2. Samuru, I love this. We too often live behind our clouds.

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  3. this is soooo beautiful, and thot provoking 2, thks 4 sharing.

    Permit me to say u're quite gifted, I like it here.

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  4. really sweet, sometimes we all hide behind a cloud and dont let the sunshine through.

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  5. I liked this, I'm trying very hard not to hide lately and it's a whole lot easier when I don't. Thanks

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  6. it feels nice when the clouds move and let the sunshine through...

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  7. Economy of words, simple,concise, thats how truth works best, lovely!

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  8. strictly for my friends~ thank you!
    choices~ thanks
    don~ you are too kind!
    Walt whitman... not quite,
    but thanks so very much!
    pat~ thanks so much.
    It is good to come out
    from behind our clouds!

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  9. christabelle~ Thanks so very much
    for the very kind words!

    starry nights~ thanks so much!

    kathi~ thanks so much.
    You are doing great.
    Just be the special
    wonderful person you
    are... and, the dark clouds
    will be lifted!

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  10. ari4u~ nice to see you again!
    Yes so nice when the clouds
    move... and let the
    sunshine through.

    plus ultra~ Thanks so much for
    the very kind words!

    keshi~ thank you!

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  11. i love this one!
    much said in few words...

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  12. polona,
    So glad you liked the poem!
    Thank you!

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Each day comes
bearing its own gifts ...
Untie the ribbons.

-Ruth Ann Schabacker